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Review #1, by Khalid New Neighbor

24th September 2011:
hello :D
nice to meet you!
this story is really good so far :D
but living in the muggle world... not such a good start for James :/ overall its pretty interesting :D can't wait for your next!

Author's Response: Hiya there, Khalid! Thank you! About the muggle world thing... yes, I've had some thoughts of it, but, well, I've always taken an interest on wizard-muggle interactions and relationships, and a way I thought of to incorporate that into the story was if James (partially - he's in auror training, remember?) lived in the muggle world, as I find that there would be no reason James would've met a muggle in Diagon Alley, for example. I am working on the next chapter - been doing some plot edits. :)

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Review #2, by NightRose New Neighbor

12th September 2011:
This is a lovely first Chapter! And it wasn't boring at all!

And the letter from Ginny was funny and sweet, a typical mum letter.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter :)


Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate it. I am working on the next chapter for now. :)


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