I really like how you portray Marlene's character. Also, I absolutely love that you mention Regulus in this chapter. It would be awesome if there was romance in future chapters between Regulus and Marlene!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Sorry it took me so long to respond. And we will see what the future brings c; if my lazy butt gets writing!

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oops... thats bad.

update!

10/10

clea smith

Author's Response: Yes it is.yikes! Thanks for the review! And high rating! You put a smile on my face! :D

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argh! please update soon, i'm dying to know what happens next!

Author's Response: hehehe! Sorry 'bout the cliffhanger :D I'll update sooner this time, don't you worry!

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oH
DUN DUN DUN!
update soon(:

Author's Response: Love the sound effects. :D and i'm almost finished with the next chapter! (:

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Oy Im excited. This is gunna be a good fanfiction

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm excited tooo(: Glad you liked! Stick around for the rest and keep reviewing! Reviews keep me modivated! hehe(;

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i like your story so far. It's interesting and i like how not everything is perfect and wonderful but she has problems at home as well. There are a few grammatical mistakes in there but at least it's not littered with them! All in all: a good start :D

Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I love reviews! They make my day(: And yeah I'm trying my best with the grammar. :D i'm glad you liked!

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Good story. Plots really good!
10/10 Abd addi g to favs!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! Reviews INSPIRE and MODIVATE me :D I'm glad you like the plot so far...there is more to come...mwahaha

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love love love and love! update soon because i want more!

10/10 and i promised to be more detailed in my next review

Clea Smith

Author's Response: The next chapters validating as I type :D and thank you thank you thank you and THANK YOU! I'm so glad you love it, and I really appreciate your reviews! They just made my day! (: (: (:

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okay LOVE HER! DEFINITELY Faving this story when i finish reading what you have. i can relate to the family problems... and the boy problems... and the wardrobe remix... but not the make up.

10/10

clea smith ;)

Author's Response: OMG! Im liking freaking out because of your awesome review! I'm glad you can relate and understand. (: I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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good first chapter. I like Marlene and katie. its snarky and funny. but it also illistrates... well that her life kinda sucks sometimes

9/10

clea smith

Author's Response: Thank you soo much! And yes . . . her home life sucks. But she has wonderfully hilarious friends! (The Marauders!) I

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hey there.cool chapter
awww i love delirious sirius...hes so SWEET :D
and i reckon Marlene is slighty jealous 2 =] figures
well till next time

lOony

Author's Response: Thank you so much:D he is sweet.most of the time! And maybe she is jealous.hmm.:D thank you again, because uve stuck with me and reviewed each time! Please keep reading reviews mean a lot to me! (:

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Wow. I love this! Amazing, really.

Author's Response: Thank you SOOO much! I'm like freaking out about my amazing reviews! :'D tears of joy! Please keep reading ill update soon!

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I like it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Nothing I love more than reviews! :'D ill update soon ad possible. Chapter 6 is already finished!

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HAHAHAH oh sirius

Author's Response: Gotta love him :D thank you soo much for the review! :'D

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:D funne...'specially the bit with the oversized clothing! must have incredibly embarrising. i do feel sorry bout her parents though and i really dont think her mum is pregnant...right???
anyways great chapter! till next time

lOony

Author's Response: eek! Thanks for the review! and yup): Poor Marlene. lol. And we'll just have to see if she's prego or not . . . hmm . . .

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Hey! Just so you know, Marlene married someone with the last name McKinnon, so it wouldn't be her name when she was a teenager.

Great story though!

Author's Response: Oh...then this may be slightly au.lol thanks for the review though!


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hiya! great story...and yay! their back at hogwarts.where it all unfolds! :D cool story so far and i really like it. till next time

lOony

Author's Response: Aww thank you(: And the unfolding beginsss . . . :D

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Aw, I love her relationship with the guys. :'D
What is up with Lily? Did Marlene do something to her or is she just hated by association?

Can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: thanks(: hehe. and Marlene and Lily are just so different. They've never gotten along and plus Marlene and James are good friends . . . and Lily 'hates' James. :D but the lily-marlene hate will end eventually! lol.

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Ah, so she's the troublemaker of the family?
Hey, I don't mind, troublemakers are fun most of the time!
I'd like to see where this is going! :)

Author's Response: thanks! ahhh! my first review! thanks so much!

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