This is such a great storyline I'm actually wishing I could just skip to the end to see if they end up together hurry with the next chapter x

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I cant wait to find out what happens next! this is bloody insane! plus draco is such a douche. Poor Hermione having to suffer, I wonder if she still plans to go to France? I would. Just to make Draco suffer a bit you know? anyways... Please update soon! i LOVE IT! (:

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I love this story. I have only recently become a Draco fan, ever since he showed up one day demanding that I write his story. He was very insistent that I write it right then and there, without stopping, even yelling at me when I had to stop to do other things. I love Draco and Hermione together in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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HermionelovesRon24,

I'm back. It took me a bit to get through this chapter. Again I think this story is great and has a lot of potential to be awesome. I know you are working with a beta to clean up some parts so I won't point out anything. But I think the spacing needed to have double returns. LOL I almost felt claustrophobic reading. I know that is weird.

Anyway, I liked that Draco freaked a little about Astoria. What is he going to do about her. Interesting. I also like Hermione's room.

I'll be reading on...

Meg

Author's Response: My original beta told me to do the spacing thing but I think I overdid it :P Unfortunately, since I haven't been in contact with her for soo long she hasn't responded to edit my chapters. So I need a new beta which I posted on the forums.
Thanks for reading and sorry for the spacing!
*Natalie

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aw he does have feelings!!! another amazing chapter please update soon.

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Can;t wait for the next chapter! Welcome back :)

Author's Response: I know I've been away for so long with no updates so I'll try to update asap!

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im loving ur story! its reallly really osom!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! And please continue reading :)
*Natalie

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I enjoyed it. Takes almost death to get through to a Malfoy, doesn't it?
You'll find instructions right on the beginning page for HPFF to help correct your spacing problem. If it's been a yr since you were last on, you missed the latest help page.
Keep up the good work, I loved it :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice; you're right it's been a year and a bit since I wrote anything :P

Thank you for reading the story!

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I'm sorry I didn't review any of the other chapters. The reason was that I didn't like Hermione being portrayed as a wishy washy girl! Thank God you've given her back her spine. I must like your story though, because I was so carried away that I was practically screaming at Hermione to leave the scumbag and go into hiding. Being a Draco lover,[who isn't], your story must be powerful. Or perhaps I need to get a life. Belay that, I'll always be a Dramione forever kind of girl. Kudos to you for a so far brilliant story! 'til your next posting, Ciao!

Author's Response: I know my Hermione is a bit OCC but I did that on purpose to show how her pregnancy and the situation is affecting her and how the war also affected her. However, the old, feisty Hermione is coming back don't worry! And thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm happy with the reactions from the readers; it was what I was aiming for :) Anyway, thanks again and keep reading!
*Natalie

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You change from 3rd person to 1st person and back again. It was a little confusing. I love the idea of this story, I usually can't be convinced of a Dramione pairing, but the one night stand angle and unexpected pregnancy seems more realistic to me.

Author's Response: Oh, I didn't realise that! I'll check that once (hopefully) I get a new beta. And thank you for R&R hope you continue reading!
*Natalie

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Honestly, Hermione was rather true to her character until this chapter... I cannot see her ever signing her child away... ):
Update soon, please.

Author's Response: Well my Chapter 8 is up now so you can read it now and see what you think...Btw I need a new beta so any readers who can recommend/be my beta would be fantastic. (It's on the Beta section on the forums). Thanks!

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When did Hermione become a weak , brainless twit?

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omg draco seem s so heartless, i love your book but i hate the fact their so mean to each other. anyway please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and yes but because if I don't then it will too OCC :( Anyway, I've submitted the next chapter today so it should be up soon.
*Natalie

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HermionelovesRon24,

Well, I liked the information in this chapter it seemed a little rushed or forced. I think your chapter need more description. I don't think Hermione would say

""Fine, but you won't like it..." She said, looking away. "Malfoy, I'm pregnant," she whispered as she felt hot tears spill from her eyes."

If you cut out the first part it would seem more Hermione-ish. I think describing her feelings as it was hard to do but she knew it was the right thing and then telling him but the way it came out was out of character for me.

If you look up "cuppa" it means a cup of tea. But I see what you were aiming for by Hermione drinking tea instead of coffee since she is pregnant and pregnant women are suppose to avoid excess caffeine.

I could see Draco having a weird connection with HErmione and helping her but I think he find it uncomfortable and maybe make a comment or something. What was on the envelope to make Blaise think that Hermione's issue would be involving Draco?

I hope you take this as constructive and not bad. I do like your story so far and I will continue to read.

Meg

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and the points you made; another reviewer commented on this chapter too. So I will be rewriting parts of the story (Chapter 2) and hopefully you can reread it and see if it'll make sense. I was rushing the story a little as I was unsure how Hermione would deal with it so well spotted :) Thanks for R&R, I hope you do continue reading my story :)

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HermionelovesRon24,

Grrr... I wished she had jumped out of bed and slapped him across the face for his offer. How insulting!! Little ferret boy!!

Anyway, great chapter! I love the beginning. Lots of action ;) hehe. But really it's a great intro to you story. I can't wait to read more.

Meg

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! Haha, I agree too :)

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please update soon. Its awesome!!! i am new here so i dnt know how u know dat ur stories are updted, if u can msg me, if u can in here!!!

Author's Response: Welcome to Harrypotterfanfiction! I personally find out by clicking the navigation column on the right and scroll to the list of pairings and select the one I chose to wrote about and the story should come up as "Recently updated". Or you can go to your account, click on the box thing at the bottom and the number of chapters should have changed or you can access my stories to have a look.

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Confused by this. I initially thought Ron was the father until you said. too many important details have been missed out. However it is very interesting to read, good job:) x

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Hi, Normally I hate Dramione with a passion, but reading this has made me change my mind.

First of all, I LOVE the fact it's set after Hogwarts and it's Not the typical Dramione cliche where they're head boy and girl, sharing a dorm, fall in love and get pregnant.

Second, I think you've kept true to the characters personalities and how they act.

Third, I'm starting to like Dramione a teensy tiny bit more than I did (thanks to you x)

And Fourth, PLease, Please update. I really, really want to find out what happens next. Does Hermione give him the baby or not?. I really hope she doesn't. Maybe Hermione and Ron get back together with the baby?

Update soon
10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

Author's Response: I apologize to all my readers for abandoning this story for so long; I've been concentrating on my studies for a while. Recently, I found myself reading some Dramione fics which inspired me to continue. So, I'll be updating soon but I'm not sure when though. Sorry, and I feel very happy that you enjoyed the story :)
*Natalie

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Wow, it's beautifully written! I'm really looking forward to more!!

Author's Response: Thanks much, I'm typing the next chapter up now and thanks :)
*Natalie

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omg i hate draco right now!!! Haha please continue!!! its really good so far!

Author's Response: Ah, another Draco-hater! No fear, I will be posting next chapter when I finish it, I'm still half-way through it. Thanks, I will be adding names who have been reviewing in my chapters.

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I feel for hermione! Poor girl she thought he was beginning to like her. Draco, ugh what a bastard! He would regret his decision in the future. Show him hermione! girl power :D

Author's Response: Yeah :( I hope you understand that Draco had to do this, even if he didn't want to. Hermione is definitely going to fight for her child though.
Thanks for reviewing!

*Natalie

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Aw, poor Hermione! I really thought he could get over their differences after the wedding! Ah, I wanna know what happens next, so here you have a new devoted reader.

Also, I've no idea why, but his last rule was reallyfunny. "Don't fall in love with me"? As if! I think they're both going to fall in love with each other, yes? They have to! I hope Astoria gets ditched because she's a dim-witted ninny to not want to get pregnant for her figure when poor Narcissa would be such a good grandmother to her so desperately desired grandchildren!

Well, cheers to hoping Draco and Hermione fall in love and don't get a divorce!

See you in your next update, ya?

Author's Response: Well, to answer your question first, Draco was worrying that they might start a relationship, or fall in love with each other (He can tell that Hermione had some feelings for him, and so did he. Draco wanted to clear things up between them). And, thanks for reading!

*Natalie

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I loved the Flashbacks and also the fact that you did this chapter in both Draco's and Hermione's POV. It was absolutely great!
I can't actually believe that Draco is such a jerk.. I hope he'll come around soon enough. And I am happy that Hermione decided to be strong.
Yay < 3

Author's Response: Aww, thank you.
I feel very pleased with the incredible amount of reviews complimenting my writing! I hope you continue to read my fan fiction.

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So...I'll go to the criticism first...the only problem I had with it was sometimes when the story was. It kept switching from past to present tense so it gets confusing at time. As for the praise...I really like this story...I think the idea is pretty good also, it's sort of an arranged marriage but not;) I also loved the way you described Hermione's dress and earrings! (Especially the earrings). It was so vivid, that I could just see them in my mind...so yes:) You need to update again very soon, because this story has major potential! Sorry it was so long...just needed to say all of that:)
-Arya

Author's Response: Oh, Yes I know I keep changing the tenses, but I don't even realise it! I'll get my beta to help me correct them, and thank you!!

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Will Astoria be returning soon?
Sigh this chapter was sad. I know that she can't provide for the child but I still can't believe she signed it!
And even though I love Draco, he was really mean in this chapter so I hope he falls in love with Hermione waaay before she falls for him!!

Author's Response: Yes, definitely! I know, but Hermione wants the best for her child afterall...She might try to fight for her baby...:P I hope you enjoyed it. :)

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