I read all the chapters of this fanfiction already and i think it's awsome. Love RoCorpius.
Thanks for writing,
J.W Report Review
please update? this is the best fanfic i have read on this site, i love it!!! Report Review
October the second is my birthday!!! :D this made my day :) Report Review
i absolutely adore this story!!! im so so impatient to read what happens afterwards!!! most addicting and well written rosius i have read so far :) youre an amazing writer :D Report Review
I absolutly love your story! It's so amazing and I looove all of them! I never thought that I'd ever love a Goyle, haha :P With that said, I really miss your story! It's one of my favorites and you're a really good writer! I hope that you'll upload a new chapter soon. Don't keep us waiting (it was a really good cliffhanger by the way) and keep on writing, love. Report Review
oh this is exciting im looking forward to draco and hermiones memories! great chapter will be sad when this story ends! glad there'll be a sequel xxAuthor's Response: I just updated the next (and final) chapter! Hopefully it will be up soon! :D Report Review
Love it. Post agin soon please! Report Review
Please update soon! I love your story so much its my favorite Report Review
Prtty pretty pretty please update? This is my favorite story on hpff and i've been waiting to see what comes next! Love this story 10/10 :) Report Review
please update, i really miss this story Report Review
have you abandoned this or what? Report Review
please write the next chapter, i'm keen to read it. Report Review
Hurry up with the next chapter... loving the story . Report Review
i just read all 26 chapters at once, i just couldn't stop reading...wanted to know what happens next! i really like this story, you have written it well.
found a fan in me :) Report Review
I quite enjoy reading your story, i find it cute and interesting. I really don't want you to quit on this story as i enjoy reading it so much, please keep adding to this story? Report Review
I really love your writing! I cannot wait for the next chapter, to see which memories you've decided to play for Rose and Scorpius.
Never give up on writing; you have a true talent, and it is not to be underestimated.
Jeanie Report Review
Cool Book, i need more though please
:) Report Review
This was such an awesome chapter! I really loved it!
You always do such a wonderful job at bringing out the emotions, personalities, and quirks of your characters. I really enjoy each and every one of them! Zander is pretty awesome! I also really like how you have characterized everyone!
The descriptions are great and I can easily picture what is going on in my mind as I read through the story. I loved how Rose was able to understand what Astoria did and why. It was nice to see the Malfoy's change so to speak.
Keep up the awesome writing! =)
P.s. I am so glad that you have added this chapter and a new one! I was starting to worry! Report Review
You are great at writing stories! You have me completely immersed in this book, and I'm always eager to get to the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Report Review
Okay so I just started reading this story last night/very early this morning and I figured I should review because this story is pretty awesome but I just couldn't stop reading until I came to the end of the chapters up (which reminds me, update soon please this is amazing). So I'm leaving one really long review to make up for the fact that I genuinely could not stop reading in order to leave ones throughout the story. I'll go back and reread the whole story one day and leave reviews on a few more chapters then.
Anyway, so I really love this story which makes me feel pretty stupid that I had kind of avoided (is that the word?) it. I don't know why, there was just something in the summary that sort of put me off it but now I've read it I realise how incredibly idiotic that was because this is genuinely one of the best stories I have ever ever ever read. Seriously. Its really well written and I adore the plot.
I think Zander is the cutest bad boy ever, he's such a player at the beginning but his like brotherly love for Scorp and his protection of Rose is adorable and he's such a likeable character despite all the dark magic and everything. I basically just love him and want one myself. Do you mail order?
Scorp... well he's just so cute! He's so protective of Rose and he loves her so much its adorable. The whole thing with Lucius abusing him is horrible but it explains a lot and it makes everything with Rose that much cuter, you know?
Rose, I really like your portrayal of her here. I love her rebellious phase, I think its a great way of pointing out that her whole family of cousins were being so overbearing and really expected her to be perfect so becoming the 'slytherin angel' or 'gryffindor bad girl' really worked and it was really amusing, have to admit.
I think the dark magic is so interesting, by rights they should be caught and sent to Azkaban but they aren't using it evilly, they just want to protect themselves and Rose, which I guess makes all the difference. Speaking of protection, that whole avada kedavring of Dohlohv and Lestrange was so exciting! It was great, you showed their love so perfectly because they were both willing to kill to save the other. Especially Rose for who this would have been scary and unknown and completely alien to her. I mean, obviously Scorp isn't a murderer or anything and he doesn't go around sending jets of green lights at everyone who annoys him but because of the whole Lucius thing, he has more of a ...background in it whereas Rose would only know what she had been taught in DADA. I think this demonstrates the depth of their love perfectly, even more than the matching tattoos which in real life are really cheesy but here are cute.
Okay so I could go on for a lot more but I think my views on each of your characters really would bore you so I'm just going to say, that I absolutely love your story, I think the plot is so interesting and the characters are really well developed. I also love how its pretty canon, I really hate stories that aren't because they just don't seem as real (I am aware that none of this is ACTUALLY real but I would appreciate it if we all just pretended). Anyway, your story is amazing, keep up the brilliant work and please update as soon as possible because I cannot wait to read the rest!
K x Report Review
Wow, that was so good! Draco's response was very well written. Can't wait to see the memories from Hermione and Draco! Report Review
HOLY CRAP ON A CRACKER THIS IS SO GOOD Report Review
that to me was the ending. i really have enjoyed this story so far! i love scorp/rose pairings and you've done a brilliant job. i did a wee fist pump when vance was killed! glad he's gone and the rest of woman kind are safe from his predator nature! looking forward to a sequel!! Report Review
i have quite enjoyed reading all of the chapters so far, i didn't enjoy when i had to put down my laptop. Report Review
absolutely wonderful. Can't wait for a couple more chapters and would love a sequel. :) Report Review
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