Reading Reviews for Albus The Wonder Years.
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by dobbys_socks I'll Begin

11th April 2012:
This is cool. I wasn't sure about it when I clicked it but now I see that it's great! Just a few grammatical errors but other than that, I loved it!


Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this enough to stop by and leave a few words.
I want to try and do something that no one had done before and to have Albus has an old man recounting stories seemed like a good idea.
Thanks again for the read and review.

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Review #2, by Moonyxluna I'll Begin

30th January 2012:
#100, here goes :)

This was a really neat start to what looks like it's going to be a great story to read. It's cool that you decided to go with Albus at an old age, it's something different that I don't think I've ever read about, a next generation character as a grandparent.

I thought all the names dedicated to different family members were really sweet. I noticed a Scorpius, so he must have been around in the family, which is always nice :)

It makes me wish it was christmas again! Even though it was only a month ago.

Thanks for suggesting this, I'll be watching for updates for sure! Great job.

Author's Response: Hi.
Thanks for the review. I thought I would do something that I thought no one else had done before, and an elderly Albus seemed the perfect place to start.
Thanks again for the review and I'm honoured to be your 100th. I will be updating asap so as long as you've fav it you'll know when.

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Review #3, by the_edge_of_love I'll Begin

21st January 2012:
Oh, this a lovely start!

I think it's a very good idea to write Albus, a member of the next generation, as an old man with children and grandchildren. It's quite an original take and I'm looking forward to reading what you'll think of his youth's adventures.

~ Angie

Author's Response: Hi.
I tried to think of an idea for a story that nobody had done before, and this idea seemed the way to go. As far as I can tell no one has delved into this idea.
Now that my various writing projects are over, I can now get my older stories updated. So look out for more updates.
There will be one one shot up before then, which is my writers duel entry (can't tell you what it is for obvious reasons). It'll be up in the next couple of weeks. So plz do look out for it. I will tell people on the forums when I'm cleared to put it on the site.
Many thanks for taking the time to review.

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Review #4, by goaskalice I'll Begin

30th December 2011:
Ah, where's the rest of it ;)

Author's Response: Don't worry I have not abandoned this story. None of my stories will be abandoned. For the past few months I had been working on various writing projects. But they are almost over now and I'll be able to get back to updating my earlier stories. So there will be more soon.
If you want to read a completed story, I do have two on the site which you might like.
Thanks again for reading.

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Review #5, by Dobby1964 I'll Begin

15th November 2011:
I like this idea of a selection of short stories from Al's early life with his dad and family. I bet there will be one or two stories to tell about the Potter family. 8/10 to start.

Author's Response: Many thanks for the review. There are a few amazing stories to come so watch this space.

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Review #6, by donnas ghost I'll Begin

16th September 2011:
ooh, yay sounds great!! but you have to keep writing.

Author's Response: I will. At the moment I'm really gauging peoples reactions to see what they think. Many thanks for stopping by again and leaving a comment.

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