It was good I wish there was more! Please add on!!! Other wise goodAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it was good. I will add on! Report Review
Short and sweet but great ff :D It was an interesting read and hope you write more, whether a continuation or another story :DAuthor's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I will write more! Report Review
very nice, but hermoine and ron seem too natural for the 1st book. and i had a problem with too much speech, no description. you should make them more detailed. well done anyway, 7/10Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! Okay, I'll take the advice for next time! Report Review
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