That was horribly sad but really well written! I would love it if you wrote a sequel! Xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, please enjoy the prequel if you decide to read it as well!!!

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Ok. I read this so I cOuld go read your other story and now I'm crying and I can't stop. Omg I'm about to die. I can't even believe it. Now I have to go read the other one hopefully I won't keep cryin.

Author's Response: As awful as I feel for making you cry, I also laughed a bit at your review... And the bad feeling about you crying aren't that bad, because I really wanted people to feel that way.

I really hope that you like the prequel! Try not to cry too much while reading this!

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oh.oh my merlin.
This brought real tears to my eyes, I honestly can't imagine Rose dying, but tthis was simply beautiful, completely heart breaking, but beautiful!
:')
Im going to go read the sequel RIGHT NOW!!

Author's Response: Aw, shucks! Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next one!

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This was really sad but really well written...I really like narratives with only snippets of dialogue in them:) But seriously, this was really sad...I can't even imagine how Scorpius must have felt! Anyway, keep writing 'cause you're pretty good:)
-Arya

Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I've been really blocked recently, so I haven't written really anything since this one. I'm so glad that you liked it though!

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Well this is Cleopatra from the forums with a review for the hooked sentence challenge. First of all, I’m so sorry for the lateness of the review but this is my exam year so I’m really busy. I really like the summary for this one I think it’s very well picked but I would advise you to get a banner because many people don’t read stories unfortunately without a banner. You can request one at TDA. Uhm before I begin reading this ( I’m reading an writing my review at the same time ) I noticed you have such large spaces between your paragraphs perhaps you could fix it some readers find them annoying ( not me I once had a reviewer complain about it in my own story so I mean it in the best way)

Onto the hooked sentence, since that's what this challenge was all about. It definitely made me wonder what was going on . Like what wasn’t supposed to be like this so it and I think it was a really strong sentence so you began extremely strong but it also fit the end perfectly it didn’t seem clumsy or anything of that kind at all. But can I say I didn’t expect this what you wrote I expected a break up or something so kudos to you.

I really liked the idea you had here like I said above I didn’t expect that to happen and that is just the thing I enjoy in stories that something happens which I didn’t expect. Also you have a nice writing style and I could empathy with Scorpius. I like the fact he was a healer and Rose an auror as in most stories it’s the other way around because they see being a healer more as a feminine job and being an auror more as a masculine job

That's about all I can think to say. This was a really a touching piece and I hope you enjoyed entering this challenge. I have to remind you off the fact you can enter as many times as you want ;P Thanks for entering my challenge and check back after the deadline to see if you've won!

Cleopatra

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad that you didn't expect it. I'm working ona banner for it, just haven't gotten everything I want for it. Can't wait to find out how I did!

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Ahhh! That was awesome! The idea was brilliant, and the writing was amazing! There was a part of me that wanted him to save Rose instead of the baby, but I seriously felt so torn along with Scorpius. You're a great writer, I loved this. Great job! And I loved how you wrote about how they got together, and how he was kind of going through his whole life with her before she died. It was so incredibly sweet. :)

Keep writing x flufff

Also... if you ever get some extra time, could you R&R my fanfic "Darkest Night"? It's a Dramione, and I don't know if you like them, but if you're interested I would really appreciate it! Thank you! ;D

10/10 Yay! It's kinda rare for me.

Author's Response: Um... wow!

I'm so glad you liked this, and sure, I'll read Darkest Night.

I had a lot of fun writing it, even if I was really sad while doing it. There was a part of me that wanted to save Rose, but I knew that she wouldn't stand for that in a million years, you know?

Thanks again!

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