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Review #1, by Keeperoliver Chapter 1: The New Girl in Godric's Hollow

4th September 2011:
Interesting story, but it has a problem. You are using Occlumency as reading a person's mind. It is actually the blocking of another person attempting to read ones mind. It is Legilimency that is reading a person's mind. Other than that not a bad story.

Author's Response: Oh, God, I feel stupid now! Heehee. Sorry, I'll go back and fix that! Thanks for that! I always got those mixed up for some reason that is unknown to me :/ But I'm glad you like my story!

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