OMG please write the next chapter!! it's great :) Report Review
Can I just say--I love How I Met Your Mother SO MUCH. It is seriously one of my favourite TV shows ever.
& this is damn awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter. ;D
Uh, just one thing, you wrote: "ever did for me, cause because of that train ride I found my best mate." I think you added an extra 'cause' in there?Author's Response: I actually did mean to write it that way. I'm writing from the point of view of Albus and so the grammar won't always be correct. Does that make sense? Report Review
A marridge between Rose and Scorp would be an interesting combination. I'd love to see Ron's reaction to that.
The relationship with Al and Al (LOL) should be interesting to see how that developes. 10/10.Author's Response: LOL I hadn't even realized the Al and Al things that's great! I'll have to use that :D Report Review
An interesting start to your story. Scorp in Gryffindor, an interesting idea. I'll be following that choice with interest. Though you may want to include a bit about the Slytherin table and the rest of the school being amazed and silent at the hats choice. Maybe also include a commentary from the hat about Scorp's loyalty towards friends and wanting to be his own person etc.
A nice start and 10/10.Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I will be sure to include lots of info about the sorting later. I have a plan lol A detailed flashback is in the works! Report Review
This rocks! I love the show How I Met Your Mother and I am super excited to read more of this!
I'm guessing that Albus is Ted, Scorpius is Marshall, Rose is Lily, and Alannah is Robin, all you need is a Barney! Unless i'm completely wrong and this has nothing to do with the show and I am just a complete idiot, but i like my chances. I love the story so far!! (but i do not like that Scorpius is in Gryffindor. :(. )Author's Response: Scorpius in Gryffindor will be explained later in the story! I know I wasn't a huge fan of it either, but it serves a purpose :D And of course this is based on the awesomeness that is HIMYM! And you got most characters right. Scorpius kinda doubles as Barney and Marshall. Thank you so much for your review! Report Review
Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: More is on the way ;) Report Review
Oh my gosh! This is such a cool idea! I love How I Met Your Mother and I love this so far!!!Author's Response: Thanks! I love HIMYM too :D I was watching it one day and was like wow this is like the next generation crew and then BAM I started typing. Report Review
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