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Review #1, by HeadlessHuntsman Chapter One

24th August 2011:
I liked the story as short as it was. I do have a question did Harry break up with Ginny before or after he met the other person. It seems like he was telling Mrs W. that he met her and then broke up with Ginny then he in turn tells Ron is was after he broke up with Ginny... Which is it?

Author's Response: Haha sorry, I still have to fix that. There are more chapters to come, I just forgot to fix the "completed" thing. He actually broke up with Ginny after he met the other girl. Guess that is confusing, I'm sorry.

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Review #2, by Manwe Valarian Chapter One

23rd August 2011:
An interesting start. The story is listed as a Novella, but it is also marked as being completed. You may want to change it to WIP.
Your writing was pretty good. The only criticism would be, it seemed to be a little jumpy. It seemed to jump from one scene to another without a smooth transition. If this is your only problem, then you are doing a good job.

Author's Response: Ah good point. When I was putting that up there, I was thinking about the fact that I'm completely done writing it, not the the fact that it isn't all posted yet. I shall change that, thank you. And yeah I realize that but this is the first fanfic (well, techincally second but it used to be part of a series and that series was my first) I wrote so I have a hard time changing it. It's five years old :) So it's gonna be kinda rough. I just don't have the heart to change it.

Thanks for reading. I hope you continue to follow alongs. And tahnks for the review!!


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