This was great - I loved Hermione at the end, wanting a high-five and Fred and George looking at eachother as if the world had ended. I presume this is set during Umbridge's tenure at Hogwarts?
You should definitely keep writing this one - you've set it up nicely, please don't abandon it! :-)Author's Response: This is set in Umbridge's tenure at Hogwarts.
I want to keep writing it, it's just hard trying to set up the characters due to the effect of the potion. That and life gets in the way of writing a lot! But I am trying to get some more up soon!
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Oh dear! More humour and pranking Amy! Well I think I can see your niche within the writing world!
I loved the way Fred and George were just so casually doing this in their dorm, not even going to attempt to cover up that they were making a potion which did make me laugh. Also their blaze attitude to everything such as 'Yeah well it was about 5 minutes' made me laugh as it meant that something was almost guarenteed to go wrong.
I love the fact that it also didn't just afect the Common Room but also the whole of Hogwarts. It shows its potency and potentially how good the prank could have been if they'd have managed to pull it off.
Also Hermione's attitude! I would love her to have been like that but I must admit it does seem a little lax even though it is just hilarious.Author's Response: Really? I never thought I could write humour well! :P
They never came across as subtle people to me, especially with them testing products on the first years. it just seemed like something they would do.
Hermione's attitude will be explained more in future chapters ;)
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Indeed, what have they done? And what kind of potion were they concocting? Plz answer my questions by updating soon. 10/10.Author's Response: I'm going to try and write some more today =D So hopfully you should find out soon =D Report Review
As I've already told you, this is simply AMAZING! :D
I love the whole idea behind the story, I love how you perfectly write, and describe, Fred and George and I really, really like your way of describing the entire scene. It actually feels like we are there, watching everything and close enough to see everyone's reactions!
It's a lovely written prologue and I can't wait for the 1st chapter! (:
-MariaAuthor's Response: Awww, thank you =D
I'm glad you liked it =D I'm always really cautious with describing things..I never feel like I do it well...but you saying that I do is really nice =D
I'll try and get it to you soon =D Report Review
Ahem, yes, I was reading this instead of reading my textbook...but you're not mad, right? :P
Ok, I LOVE THIS. Fred and George are always hilarious, and especially so in this! The potion sounds so unique, I have to wonder though, what were they hoping the potion would be able to do? Obviously not emit gas!
I can't wait to see why Hermione reacted the way she did :D This has all the makings of a great story, you've drawn me right in.
-JuliaAuthor's Response: JULIA!!
Ok, I'm not mad anymore =D But now you have to go read your textbook, ok?
You do? *squee* You will have to wait to find out =D
You will have to wait for that too =P It does? Aww, thank you! Report Review
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