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Review #1, by EmilyPotter2390 Our Song

9th January 2012:
I loved this one! I adore this song and the changes you put to it and everything!

Em

P.S. I noticed that it says you make your own banners... Is there anyway you can tell me how because I am dying to have a banner on my story...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed my story! :D

And yeah I do make most of my banners, tough I didn't make the one for this story! And sure i can help you if you want! :D I'm LunaLovegood on TDA and LunarLuna on the forums so you can PM me from either one and I can teach you! Or if you like I'd be more than glad to make you one! :D


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Review #2, by house elf Our Song

7th October 2011:
This was really good, the 'in the front seat of my broom' line and 'one-hand feel on the wooden handle' made me laugh :3 I think you might have overused ellipses though? I dunno, it might just be me being fussy :p

Author's Response: Maybe... I'll check it out, in any case thanks for reviewing! :)

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Review #3, by Person Our Song

11th September 2011:
This is one of my Fave songs, by my face artist, to a cute couple! Kudos to you!
Though it was bit run on, still... Kudos!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)

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Review #4, by AnnaKay Our Song

9th September 2011:
I think that this was a good chapter.

There are a few problems wrong with it, specifically with the lyrics of the song. I know that in the tos it says that song lyrics can't be in blocks of more than three lines. I think you might need to look at that.

But overall you did a good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I'll check it out!^^ And thanks for reviewing! :)

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Review #5, by Sadie Our Song

30th August 2011:
I loved the plot and you actually spelled things right and used good grammar! (I'm not a grammar freak, but it gets pretty annoying sometimes when you can't even understand the story.) Anyway, even though I'm not a huge fan of songfics and I was hesitant to read this, I found that I really enjoyed reading this one. The clearing in the forest part was the only bit that was a little confusing, but other than that... I really hope you write more in the future! ;)))

Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely review^.^! I'll be sure to re-read the clearing part and see if I can make it clearer! :D

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