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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Cezera One

30th June 2012:
Awesome!!
The story is just so awesome please continue

Author's Response: Thank you! I will, I'm just sort of having writers block with this one!

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Review #2, by anonymous diva One

20th August 2011:
Hello! I am shaheen from the forums and I am here as requested.

first of all I would like to tell you that both your banner and chapter image are very catchy and awesome.

Coming to the story now.
It was very nice and wonderful .I really liked it and didn't find any grammatical errors as such . I am already looking forward to read the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #3, by academica One

19th August 2011:
Hey there! Here with your requested review :)

First of all, this isn't really relevant to your story, but the banner and CI are so unique and pretty :) Nice choice there!

This was a very nice start, and I think you did just fine writing in Hogwarts Era. I really liked your characterization, especially the way you did Luna. I could easily picture Evanna Lynch acting and saying the lines just as you wrote them. I definitely see Angel as a bit different, but not as optimistic as Luna, just as you said. To me, she seems a little bit like a rebel, maybe even a little tomboy-ish. She kind of does things her way and just deals with everyone else the best that she can. All in all, you've got a pretty interesting OC there.

The story flowed nicely and the plot is interesting so far. I liked the way you set up the chapter, describing the empty halls and Angel's haphazard dress. That was a nice little bit of imagery. I also didn't spot any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors, which is always a plus :)

Nice job! Thanks for requesting a review, and I hope my comments are helpful to you :)

academica

Author's Response: THANK YOU :)

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