Hi. . . . I absolutely love this story . . . . UPDATE! Report Review
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Wow all these chapters are awesome! Update soon because I really like this story. So far I don't like dom but my favourite character at the moment is defiantly Louis but I don't really know why. Once again update really soon :) Report Review
Awesome chapter I love it already:) Can't wait to see what living with three boys must be like. I love the way you wrote this chapter and i'm going to go read the next chapter :) Ta
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I really really love Rose! She is absolutly hilarious with the "don't come unless you bring food" rule. :) Great chapter and story :) Report Review
This is hillarious. I love the interaction between the four of them. Especially Between the guys :) Report Review
I really like Charlie. She's super cute and funny. I think you should continue to do at least a few chapters in James' point of view because he really brings an interesting take and light to the story :) Report Review
Hey there! I love Enemies with Benefits and thought I'd check out some of your other stories. This is absolutely brilliant, and really really funny. I was laughing a lot through this, and your writing style is wonderful.
You know what else would be wonderful? An update ;) on anything really. I love all your stories, so any update would be great.
Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more from you soon,
- Adele :) Report Review
It's been nearly a year since you last updated...where did you go? Report Review
This story started off so nice. I would love to read more! Report Review
Please write some more! I love this story!!! :)
I hate Dom but i guess she's just one of those characters who we love to hate. Please update soon!! :) Report Review
please please please update soon!!! i love this story! x Report Review
Are you continuing this? Because it's really awesome. Report Review
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I love this! I love New Girl too, and this fanfic take on it is great!
Especially like Charlie's character Report Review
I like all the characters a lot so far :)
Dom...well she's annoying and she sucks, but it's pretty funny. I would /really/ like to see what would happen if Charlie just went ahead and punched her in the face sometime...lol.
I can tell you're planning on shipping Charlie with James and I think that's cute. I do really like Louis and Aidan, though. Aidan is hillarious and adorable. I love that he's such a weirdo. I think I'll like Louis even more when we learn more about him. He definitely seems interesting -I like how there are lots of surprises with him. Like his messy room with a tidy bed.
Charlie seems really cool, too. I liked James perspective, but I liked Charlie more with her own perspective. Maybe that was just because it was the first chapter v. the second and third, though.
I do hope you tell us WHY Aidan is obsessed with grapefruits...?
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Please update this series. what happens next ? really want to know. please. with sprinkles. can we meet albus next ? please. Report Review
And Dom is like some people I know
this is really good! and I love that show new girl!
please keep updating :D Report Review
Oh dear Merlin. This story makes me smile (does it happen to be based off New Girl?) I really love it, especially how it's not like most Next Gen. where it's immediately OMG I love you!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Ellie Report Review
I'm loving this so far... :)
Merlin how does Bill put up with both of his daughters...
Pleazee Update? Report Review
Such a good story!! Please keep going, these characters are addicting, good job with the characterizationsAuthor's Response: Well thanks! I love the characters in this story too. Escpecially James and Aidan! I actually have a new story coming out in like two days! It's called The Way I Am and it's a Hugo/OC! You should check it out when you get the chance (: Report Review
LAAVVVE THIIS :D
it's so nice finding a character that isn't ANNOYING
i mean, this site is full of really annoying nice pretty americans who boys fall in love with, sarcastic stuck up teenagers and miss innocent weasleys. you have no idea how refreshing it is to find a character NOT a stereotype. aah
-Bea xoxoxoxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, it really means a lot. I tried to make Charlie awesome yet not annoying and I'm glad I somewhat succeeded! Report Review
Awesome!! Hurry and update soon please!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon! :D Report Review
I absolutly love it! Update Roomies, Love Goddesses and Enemies soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon! Report Review
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