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Review #1, by Infinityx Her Untold Begining

9th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 review

Hello there! I love the story title and your story summary caught my attention so here I am to review!
I think a take on the whole Harry Potter series and adventures from the perspective of a death eater's daughter is a truly brilliant idea. This first chapter was a wonderful beginning! I love the ah you've described their home and you've used some incredible imagery! I especially love that phrase "like a pickle in a pumpkin patch". That was great!
You've introduced the main character and the kind of environment she's living in, in such few words! Kudos to you! I'd love to read more about this as it's really an incredible plot like so I really hope you update!

Good luck!

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