This is a great entry, and an excellent way to use the phrase. Don't apologize for the length- I like short oneshots. There's a lot to be said for the ability to tell a story in very few words. Thanks for participating!Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Wow! That was really cool. I liked how you did the whole "Why are we doing this?" thing throughout, and how "he was never truly a Marauder." Aw, poor Peter. I think you wrote him very well, and I liked how you made him feel no remorse when James and Lily died. I wouldn't have thought that, but now that I do think about it you're probably right. He probably did have a bit of bottled up... something inside of him. Anyways, nice take on Peter, and great job! You're a wonderful writer!
Also, if you ever have some extra time, could you R&R my fanfic "Darkest Night"? Sorry to be asking this, but I would really appreciate it! Thank you!
Keep writing ~ fluffAuthor's Response: Well, I figured something had to make him turn ^_^
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