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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Veritaserum27 Chapter One

19th March 2015:
Hi there!

I saw this story didn't have very many reviews and I thought I'd stop by!

I really like how you've told such a sad story, but wove a bit of mystery into it. I believe the narrator is Marlene McKinnon or maybe Dorcas Meadowes or possibly some other love interest of Sirius's. It sounds like James didn't survive the attack from Voldemort, but Lily did and now she is much older and living in some sort of asylum. I couldn't tell if Harry was still around or not, but that didn't detract from the story at all.

I thought is was beautifully sad and there was a poetic way to how the words flowed and the narrator seemed so happy when she was with Lily and so sad to be having to talk about her at the funeral. Great job!

Also - I'm also leaving this review in support of the HPFF Fundraiser. I'm sure you noticed there's one going on to help HPFF stay online. You should check it out!

♥ Beth (Veritaserum27)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story this one was a personal one for me.

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 Chapter One

13th November 2011:
I take it (since you mention James) that this is set about the time of the first wizarding war?
With this one shot you've done a good job and let yourself open to do a sequel. You could maybe do something where Harry follows a similar path to what Neville did when his parents were tortured into insanity, but not quite the same.
Nicely written one shot and 9/10.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it, since this story is personal to me. I was considering doing a sequel, thanks for your feed back I will take it into consideration.

Thanks so much for the review!

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