This is so heartbreaking and yet, so lovely. Really nice work. :) Report Review
Oh my gosh! You are an AMAZING author. This is a really, really great fanfic. The chemistry between the two is almost tangible. The way this is written... It's so great that words cannot describe. I really love your writing style. I will defiantly be looking for some of your other stories!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
This review means a lot to me and I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. I tried to capture their chemistry the best I could, so I'm delighted that you thought it seemed realistic. Report Review
wow, this was an incredibly well-written one-shot! honestly, this was so amazing. your descriptions and overall plot we simply breathtaking. i loved the whole concept of this story and was a Harry/Hermione shipped for a very long time. i've sort of fallen out of it now but this truly made me remember why i loved them for so long. they have chemistry and this one-shot displayed that cannon fact so vividly. great job. keep up the amazing writing!! (:Author's Response: You're really much too sweet! But thank you so much, your review really means a lot to me. (:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the one-shot! They do have a sort of undeniable chemistry and I just felt the need to put that in a new light.
Thanks again for the kind review. Report Review
I'm always a fan of realistic fan fiction. This is great. I also felt pretty sad at the end. Was left with a shocked expression haha!
You understand the characters very well.
I hope you write more stories. This one was a pleasant surprise.Author's Response: Thank you so sooo much! (:
You're much too kind.
I'm sorry that you felt sad, but it was a sad story that I was telling.
And I definately am going to write more stories on HPFF! I'm actually working on a novel right now, but I just want to make sure I have all the little details worked out before I post the first chapter. (: Report Review
oh my... this. this actually made me shed a single tear full of sadness. beautifully written. i can't say anything more. just.. beautiful but very very sad.Author's Response: Aww you're too sweet :)
I'm sorry it made you cry... but in a way I guess that makes me sort of happy. Haha only because it means that I was able to get the emotions across okay.
Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
Oh. My. God.
There aren't many other stories i've read that were as heartfelt as your's.
I actually ached alongside Hermione.
This is something that is going to stay with me for a long time.
You have a gift. :)Author's Response: Ohmygosh this review was the sweetest thing; thank you so much! (:
Hearing that a reader could actually feel the character's emotions is one of the best compliments a writer could ever get, so thank you. I'm glad you found Hermione's feelings believable. I'm actually not even a real H/Hr shipper, but I felt like there was something to be said for their relationship. It's a hard relationship to define, that's for sure.
And you're much too kind! Thank you for the lovely review. Report Review
:'( That is so sad!!! So sad and beautiful, just breathtaking. I loved it. Thank you for writing this. I feel like this just captures Harry's and Hermione's relationship perfectly. What they have isn't lust, or want, it isn't desire, it's something more than that and it's just beautiful. This one-shot was fantastic.Author's Response: First of all, you're my first reviewer, so thank you so much for that! (: It really means a lot to me that you took the time to leave a review.
I'm so glad you liked it! And you're right: The relationship that Harry and Hermione have has always been commonly accepted as friendship, but I find it kind of blurry. In my opinion, it's more than frienship, but it's not quite the whole "Oh wow, you are the love of my life," kind of thing.
I'm seriously over the moon that you enjoyed it! Thank you thank you thank you. Report Review
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