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Review #1, by Georgie X The Prophecy

30th September 2011:
Hooray someone replied to a review, i think normally I annoy them too much. Thanks then, I'll just go now, and remember, new chapter, new chapter, new chapter!

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Review #2, by Georgie X The Prophecy

19th September 2011:
Hey disappearing story that I gave my first ever review. Woah that was a lot of changes but still, love, love, love. Now go and write me another chapter, go on, now, stop reading my rambling and write me MORE! (and I expect it to be dedicated to me, nah just kidding)

Author's Response: Yes. This new version sounds much more exciting and mysterious to me, instead of the old prologue. I truthfully didn't like the prologue so I took it down and wrote an entire new chapter, with a different plot. The mystery of Sylvester name and the background of his mom is still the central theme. I'm happy with it now and just like you I can't wait to see what I write! I love sick and evil twists, so you will see a lot of that! Thanks for the review and I hope you keep on reviewing! Most of all I hope I won't ever disappoint you. Much love xx

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Review #3, by padfoot88 The Prophecy

18th September 2011:
Great start, I think the plot sounds interesting though it seemed a little rushed in places, maybe we could find out more about Sylvesters background, or who his father actually is? :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll keep in mind to slow it down a bit, get into Sylvester's head more. I'll try to update soon. Thanks again!

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