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Review #1, by 19 whitehorse How it Began

1st October 2011:
I really like where this story is going though at the beggining it's in the first person and then it isnt... is that on purpose? otherwise its really REALLY great :D I'm amazed :O

Author's Response: oh wow, didn't even notice that, it's my first story and i'm still trying to get everything right, also, thank's for the compliment, it really means a lot because I see all these great stories on this website, and I'm just trying to live up to them :D

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Review #2, by Khushaan Shahad How it Began

10th September 2011:
It was a nice bit but the part Draco warning him about half-bloods and mud-bloods was kind of far-fetched...but overall it was a great piece :)

Author's Response: it wasn't really THAT far from what Draco Might have said in his years at hogwarts, In this i was thinking that he still had a grudge against everyone. And thank you for the compliment, This is really the first story that i have ever written and i'm trying to make it good

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Review #3, by Emilybabeeee xxxxxx The Sorting

2nd September 2011:
this is good keep writing some more :)

Author's Response: thanks :) i almost have the 3rd chapter done, and the second one just came out

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