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The romance parts of the story are truly cringeworthy. What was interesting were the demon and dementor related parts and Moody's input. I can live with the dragon/merfolk stuff but well, not sure if that was really necessary for the story to work.

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Sorry but these OC emo romance parts are truly awful and Ron not noticing that he attacked Harry makes no sense to me. Neither does your Dumbledore talk/feel like *Dumbledore* but just another character insert.

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uhh hard to understand. No offense. it was good though!

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This is such an amazing story. So vastly different from dh
But extremely refreshing as a result :D honestly can't wait to read more.

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Sorry I haven't reviewed the story before this. I have been too engaged in reading the story. The writing is very good and I am interested to see where you go with this. It is obvious that it is going to be an uber Harry story and it has been a while since I read one so kinda looking forward to it :).

One question, are you a Raymond Feist fan? I ask because your description of the the demon is somewhat similar (though not entirely) to his. This is meant as a compliment as I have always been a big fan of his and loved the way he described magic and magical creatures. Thanks for the great read so far, looking forward to more. 10/10.

Author's Response: Hi b_lewis61,

Glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far and I'll update as soon as I can. The Feist thing ... yeah I am a big fan and now that you mention it, I think I subconciously plagerised with my description of the Black family demon ... oh well I using Rowlings characters and Feists demons good company ;0)

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Good chapter but a little confusing as there are so many story lines going on. You have such an amazing imagination! :D

Author's Response: Thanks Talltwin18,
The various story lines will start to come together as we near the end. This is Ron's chance to shine. Hope you keep reading and reviewing.

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This is definitely one of the best stories I have read on this site. It is also one of the most well written. Please keep up the good work! I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Tnx Mark

I'll see this one through to the end, but it may take longer to get each chapter up ... work is demanding more of my time. Please stick with me and see what happens. Next chapter up before the weekend.

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This really is a good story, the plot gets more twisted and the story has gotten to a nice pace. It started off a bit quick.. too.. I don't know, mushy. It's pacing started too fast but slowed down enough to get me invested in the story as I decided to give it a chance, and I boy does it go good when it found its pacing!

Good work! More chapters!

Author's Response: Hi Cirian,

Awww its his first real girlfriend, he has to be allowed a snog or two ;0)
Seriously though, this is my first story so I'm learning as I go ... more chapters to follow as quick as I can write em. Thanks for sticking with it and glad its grabbed your interest.

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Your story has become one of my favorites. Thank you. You have a lot of writing talent. When you're done with this story, maybe try something outside the Harry Potter world. I think you could do very well. Again, awesome story!

Author's Response: Hi markdbailey01,

Thank you very much for reading, reviewing and most sincerely for you very high praise.
I have the beginning of an original story in construction that I will continue to work on and should I ever get published, I'll most certainly mention HPFF and all my reviewers in the credits.

Kind regards,

Lostintransit

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I love this story and this chapter is one of my favourites. Such a brilliantly unique way of connecting Harry and Ginny, love it! Please keep writing xx

Author's Response: Hi Talltwin18,

Puts a smile on my face ever time someone says they love this story ;0) H&G have to be together to face what will come, so I needed them inseperable ... keep reading and you'll see.

Really appreciate all R&R.

Thanks,

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Very good please keep them coming I'm hooked

Author's Response: Hi Doesn't,

Yeah I'm not finished yet ... when I started this I was aiming at about 20-25 chapters, well it's kinda grown since then so I reckon another 15-20 chapters to go. Should have broken it up into a couple of books. Next chapter up soon.

Thanks for R&R!

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This book is awesome!

Author's Response: Hey Harrypotter4ever,

Love the review, short but sweet. Hope you keep reading and reviewing.

Thanks a mil

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Really enjoying this story sorry haven't reviewed. Can't believe you haven't got more reviews. Keep writing please. Just know that some of us are reading and are very appreciative of your hard work.

Author's Response: Whew!!!
I thought there was nobody out there ;0)

Hi Zorica,
Thanks for answering my plea for feedback. Really glad to hear your are enjoying the story. Yeah I'm writing and people are reading (over 17000 reads so far) but nobody's letting me know what they like or dislike, love or hate. ... This is my first effort at a novel length story so I'm trying to learn as I go.

Please everyone who reads ... review.

Cheers Zorica!

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Simply amazing so far. The story line is so dynamic and creative the only thing that compares is the intricate detail given to the characters. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hi ROCKGOD214,

Thanks very much for such high praise and especially for reading and reviewing in the first place.

It gives me immense pleasure to think that readers are enjoying my story so much.

I'll post again soon, please keep reading and especially reviewing.

Thanks again

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I have fell in love with this story and can not wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Readsalot2002,

Really glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. Thanks a mil for reviewing if there is one sure fire way to pay all the people that give us all the pleasure of reading a good HP fanfic is to review. Good or bad its the best encouragement to keep writing. Will put the next chapter up in a day or two.

Hope you keep reading and reviewing

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amazing story! you're creation of the mermish language is exquisite and the depth of the plot is wonderful to read!
my only critique is that I have been noticing periodic spelling errors and one or two sentences that have a connecting word missing here and there. (spread out through the whole story up to this point)
all in all, a wonderful story that I am thoroughly addicted to and can't wait for the rest of the story!
10/10 for all chapters up to this point!

Author's Response: Hi Rivertail,

Thank you so much for your review, I've put a lot of work into this story and it's great to get your feedback. Unfortunately I've had to proof-read this myself as I lost my beta and haven't been able to find a replacement. I'm glad your enjoying it though even with the typo's

10 out of 10 wow tnx a million.

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really loving the story so far please post again soon

Author's Response: Hi DarkPheonix,

Glad to here your enjoying the story, will post as soon as I can!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're one of a select few. This story now has over 11000 reads, but not even 50 reviews. Thats one review for every 220 reads.

Oh well! its peeps like you that I write it for.

Thans again.

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Great!The best story I have ever read on HPFF,can't wait for the next chapter best of luck and agian the best ever

Author's Response: Hi 21stcentuarywriter,

Wow you read the whole thing in 3 days!!
That is very high praise indeed. Hopefully I can make the rest of it live up to everyones expectations.

Thanks a mil for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it.

Regards

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really good , brilant

Author's Response: Thanks ... glad you liked it.
Hope you keep reading and reviewing

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Ron is getting made into a vampire? Your writing style is so addictive, I need to know what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks a mil ... really glad to hear that you are enjoying the story. I love writing it too.
Ron's always been too ordinary, now he's unique and can step out of Harry's shadow.
Will update as soon as I can but its getting harder and harder to get a chapter out each week.

Please bear with me and keep reading and reviewing ;0)

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Update please!!! I have to know what happens to Ron. Are you going to go back and explain whatever astral transmutation whatsit is with Harry's room. I was looking forward to learning about it but you seem to have left it.

Author's Response: Hi Mrs K Potter,

Astral Transmutation will be important later, as for Ron I wont say just yet . I'll update as soon as I can but work is taking more of my time at the moment so I can't promise it will be as quick as usual.

Thanks again for reads and reviews.

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Poor Ron and Hermione! I'm glad Ginny showed her the spells, now all they need is a handy portkey. Is Voldemort behind the power shortage?

Author's Response: Hey Mrs. K Potter,

Well, although they are all teens I can't help but think of them as more mature, seen as they have been fighting a war for 6 years. So a little happiness grabbed along the way seems natural.
As regards Voldemort, well lets just say he's not the baddest snake in town??

Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means alot.

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Arrgh its so good I want to read the next chapter already.
So Ginny finally told Harry about the portkey. I like the whole mind-reading thing, it makes their relationship so much closer and on a personal level. keep it up!

Author's Response: Hi Mrs. K Potter

Thanks a-mil for the praise, I'm affraid the next few chapters might be every 2nd week as work and college are demanding more of my time, but I'll post as quick as I can.

Tnx for reading and especially reviewing.

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Good chapter. I like the way Harry deals with the ministry. Why doesn't Dumbledore come clean about the true extent of his powers with Harry? What about the tear that Harry got from Deniz's father?

Author's Response: Hi 5phoenix,

Dumbledore only had a taste of the forbidden from Olipiest so inmany ways Harry knows more now than Dumbledore does. The tear is almost forgotten but will play a part later on.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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