{reviewid: 2610807, reviewer: 'steph'}
2nd November 2011:
jesus, i love your story !!! you have got a fan
Author's Response: thank you! keep reading, more soon i promise
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{reviewid: 2610777, reviewer: 'Georgie%20X'}
2nd November 2011:
Yay! A new chapter at last (not complaining) Much love for Tonks' fashion sense and you're right Smith is a douche, poor Lily. Waiting for the next one! Love Georgie X
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{reviewid: 2601657, reviewer: 'Georgie%20X'}
13th October 2011:
Where's that next chapter I'm hoping for? Also I agree with the review below about jam (I'm English) but you never now it may have been actual jelly, the wizarding world is a very strange place.
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{reviewid: 2601496, reviewer: 'Helpful%20hint'}
13th October 2011:
British have jam or marmalade not jelly. anguage still very modern and the characters are getting more OCC.
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{reviewid: 2601495, reviewer: 'helpful%20hint'}
13th October 2011:
You keep using american words and spelling such as mom. They're british they would say mum and the words are a bit too modern for the time you set it in. The story is interesting though.
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{reviewid: 2596493, reviewer: 'Georgie%20X'}
30th September 2011:
New chapter, new chapter, new chapter! What a lovely rounding off to friday afternoon. Keep going, love from your most annoying reviewer.
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{reviewid: 2591910, reviewer: 'Georgie%20X'}
19th September 2011:
Huzzzah, new chapter! Love, love, love. Keep going you totally awesome being.
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{reviewid: 2585808, reviewer: 'Georgie'}
7th September 2011:
Yay (happy face) a new chapter! Loved it keep going.
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{reviewid: 2585485, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
6th September 2011:
Aw. I like this. I didn't think Lily and Severus were friends after 5th year.
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{reviewid: 2585483, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
6th September 2011:
Poor James. He is getting depressed.
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{reviewid: 2584500, reviewer: 'Georgie%20X'}
5th September 2011:
LOVE this story, but more, more, more! NOW, get going, stop reading this rubbish and write me a new chapter, I said stop reading. Stop. Now.
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{reviewid: 2581002, reviewer: 'Jaz'}
31st August 2011:
This chapter was great too!
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{reviewid: 2581000, reviewer: 'Jaz'}
31st August 2011:
wOW! i LOVE THIS! Well written and I love how you portrayed Remus and Snape. The only fault I can find is that 'Regulous' should be 'Regulus'.
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{reviewid: 2580740, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
30th August 2011:
Love your story. : ) Can not wait to see what you do next. :)
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{reviewid: 2580723, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
30th August 2011:
Love this. I can not wait to see how he meets her. : )
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{reviewid: 2580687, reviewer: 'Dark%20Crys'}
30th August 2011:
I really enjoyed that ;).
Just a couple of tips that you could get picked on for is the age difference between Remus and Tonks, it is one of Remus' main argument the fact he is so much older than her, however this is the perks of hpff you make what ever you want to happen, happen and no one can tell you otherwise.
Also just keep an eye on your language, caught some text spelling in there e.g. u-you.
Anyway! I'm enjoying the story so far and can't wait to read more of what you've got, will be keeping an eye out for a new chapter xoxo
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{reviewid: 2580680, reviewer: 'Dark%20Crys'}
30th August 2011:
Hi! Your first hpff? Wow well done. So far I'm interested keep writing I see a lot of potential, both plot and talent wise. Xoxo
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