It's a little confusing with the present and the past switching all the time but I get the tension you tried to create. It's well written and really pin-points the feeling of loss and love at such a tumuldous moment... if you get my drift.

I'm a big Ron/Hermione fan and shower everything related to them, that is canon, with praise but you're piece really get's the subtlety of their relation.

I think you get what i'm saying... I like it, a lot!

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This is really, really lovely. The time switches work so well and make Hermione's feelings so immediate. Beautiful writing!

Author's Response: thank you!

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That is a difficult style of writing to pull off and you did it brilliantly! It had me wondering if Hermione was older and Ron had passed for a while, I like how you worked Rose in, too. It gave the sense that even after the war had long ago ended Hermione still feared for her loved ones. Well done!

Author's Response: I'm happy you think so! I really felt like experimenting, and it really was difficult. Yeah, you got it right. Hermione was indeed older and Ron had passed. I think that was another reason why it was difficult writing this piece, really made me sad, to be honest. Anyway, thank you! :D

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That was really beautifully written. The description was fantastic, and it's very, well, cautiously written, almost quietly if you know what I mean. Like you're watching a silent black and white movie or something. Sorry, I'm getting all emotional... :) Anyways, good job with this. I think it was great.

I'd really appreciate it if you would r&r my fanfic "Darkest Night"... you seem like an experienced writer, and... well, it's only if you want to. :) Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this kind review!

As soon as I have some spare time on my hands, I'll read it :)

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Wooow! This was an amazing story! I loved the way you played around with time, though I do hope Hermione's not going crazy. Anyways, the ending gave me that Inception feeling - that the situation could be read in more than one way. I liked the feeling.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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