Well, this is just lovely. Now I know where all your fluffy bunnies went. ;p
Yes, I use old smilies...I was around when the Internet was young and people still used Usenet, too.
I do like the idea of the wishing well, though. Seriously, you do capture some angst, upon a second read, that is well done without being cloying. Did I mention there's a lot of cloying stuff on this site? It tends to rub off after a while, I think it might be contagious, causing excessive use of the DELETE key when writing after reading.
I still see the theme, too, that runs through your other stuff (that I've read do far) and it's well-used here in its toned-down state. Very nice.
Or was that too fluffy of a thing to say? ;)Author's Response: Oh dear Merlin . . . I forgot about this.
Ah, my old days of fluff. I'm glad you read this, though I'm not very proud of it as of now. :( I'm glad you didn't think it was TOO fluffy though, or entailed any weird make-out scenes (another subtle jab at HPFF :D).
Yeah, that's why I write before I read (until I get distracted).
Thanks again for your review, and if you want more dark/angst/general horror you should read 421 Hours!
Ellie Report Review
The story is very cute! Well done! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It was written as a two drabble challenge on the MNFF boards, and I'm glad you liked it.
Ellie Report Review
Hahaha u no this name dont u iLuna17...i like it but u no wat i like 2 read so hahahaAuthor's Response: Yes, I know. IT'S SO FLUFFY IT WOULD MAKE YOUR HEART OF STONE BURST! MWA HA HA HA! (mods- she is my RL friend so she knows this random stuff) Report Review
That was a really sweet one-shot.
I think the way you told the two stories was really beautiful. I think it is great how you made the wishing well and the wishes of the girls.
I loved to read it.Author's Response: It was for a challenge on the mugglenet beta boards, but I really loved the idea so I wanted to see if it could get posted. I ram really glad you liked it, it just means so much to me when people read, much less review. Thank you so much! Report Review
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