I have never read a story about Louis before, his character is often overlooked, and not many people take the time to write or read about him anyway, and I will truthfully say that I was one of those people. But the way that you wrote this was amazing, so thoughtful and so sweet. I always had a picture in my mind that Louis would be quite shy, and unromantic, that he would fade into the background, but this changed that. The love he had for Emilie and Harlow was beautiful, you really should be proud. Love Livvy x 10/10 One more to go now!Author's Response: Thank you! Emilie is actually based on a girl I know and love very much. The character is lovely, along with Louis. I'm glad you liked him. I'm glad I made him romantic. I thought it was a sweet little touch! I hope you enjoyed the rest of them. Feel free to be really honest and tell me that some of them suck XD Report Review
Aww! This was really cute!! I really liked the beginning and how you built up a little back story about where they where. The end when their little girl was with them was really sweet, too. It was really believable. Nice job.
~KatAuthor's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it ^^ I thought having Harlow in there would just top the pudding :D Report Review
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