{reviewid: 2757710, reviewer: 'justanothergirl05'}
10th December 2012:
god, simply good. I share tally's fear.
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{reviewid: 2693372, reviewer: 'padmoonyfoot7'}
4th May 2012:
Very good! I do not like Megan - though I'm guessing that I'm not supposed to?
I think that Tally is a great friend, revenging for Victoire and all. Lysander and Tally - Lally - N'aaww they're so cute!
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!
(Revenging is an awesome word!)
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{reviewid: 2692679, reviewer: 'Alessandrina'}
2nd May 2012:
Write more! Also, Megan's surname should be Vane, she must have Teddy under a Love Potion! Love the story :')
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{reviewid: 2692497, reviewer: 'Courtney'}
2nd May 2012:
Well, I wonder why Teddy is acting this way. I thought at first it was to maybe see if Vic would get jealous, but he is now just pushing her away. While Vic wouldn't have had a right to be really mad about him dating Megan, she is justified to be angry for him treating her like this. I am interested to see how everything gets worked out.
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{reviewid: 2682625, reviewer: 'padmoonyfoot7'}
8th April 2012:
loved it!! please update soon!! oh yeah and whos the actress you used for Vic on the banner? just curious.
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!
Author's Response: oh gosh i can't remember now! sorry :/ thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2680100, reviewer: 'Emily'}
2nd April 2012:
I've been checking this story every week for months and months,I'm SO happy that you updated! but I get what you mean about laptops and hospitals, I'm always in and out of hospitals so don't worry about it :)
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{reviewid: 2660039, reviewer: 'Emily'}
| Review #7, by Emily | Tally |
16th February 2012:
This is great! Tally's head was interesting, we found out things that we wouldn't know i mean. Please write more ASAP!! ♥
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{reviewid: 2654477, reviewer: 'hey'}
5th February 2012:
erm. I thought her Owl's name was Carrot.
And how is Fred's hair bright? I thought James was the one with orange hair.
But other than that, I love your story!!!
Author's Response: oh it was. oops my bad. and Fred's hair is bright cause he's ginger. thank you! :)
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{reviewid: 2652570, reviewer: 'Damn%20that%20went%20by%20fast'}
| Review #9, by Damn that went by fast | Tally |
1st February 2012:
URUG@!!! WRITE MORREEE!~~!!~! i cant wait for the next chapter!! HURRY UP AND STOP THE BRAIN TORTURE!!! oh, and i like your fanfic btw. Tedoires are one of my favorite
Author's Response: thank you!! :)
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{reviewid: 2642027, reviewer: 'Emily'}
11th January 2012:
I love this! please write more ASAP!
btw i hope you're ok ;)
Author's Response: thank you :) on both counts
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{reviewid: 2632742, reviewer: 'Ashley%20Malfoy'}
22nd December 2011:
OMG! I love this story so much so far! Angry Victorie is a little scary! Also, WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO TORI TEDDY?!
Author's Response: haha thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2630219, reviewer: 'Emily'}
18th December 2011:
This is so great! Please write more!
Author's Response: thank you!
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{reviewid: 2628278, reviewer: 'ritz97'}
13th December 2011:
Good chapter!
But I am desperately waiting for some T/V action!
Author's Response: all in good time, my dear, all in good time.
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{reviewid: 2627717, reviewer: 'Emily'}
12th December 2011:
This is absolutely amazing, please write more! In bigger chapters maybe too. I love this story I'm completely hooked ♥
Author's Response: thank you! i do try and do chapters as long as possible, but sometimes i can only think in sort of thousand- word chunks. but i will try!
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{reviewid: 2627262, reviewer: 'Loony_Scorpy'}
11th December 2011:
Haha I still love the name Clunky! And I'm glad that everything is hunky dory between Ted/Vic/Sander/Tally! Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: thank you!
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{reviewid: 2625394, reviewer: 'Emily'}
6th December 2011:
More! This is really good, could you please continue? I'm going mad!
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{reviewid: 2624492, reviewer: 'justanothergirl05'}
4th December 2011:
another amazing chapter! I do think this story is amazing i know they end up together but the journey is the best part i find. do you have a tumblr? The wait when one has writers block is good because when one finally figures something out it is usually great and you have enforced this theory for me. Teddy is amazing i want one :) Tori is annoying in a lovable way, none of your characters have done anything completely out of character which is nice change.
Author's Response: thank you! no i don't have a tumblr, mainly cause i can't figure out how to use it... so sorry. thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2624346, reviewer: 'Emily'}
3rd December 2011:
I am really enjoying this story. I think that it is creative and romantic. Please write more!
Author's Response: thank you !!
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{reviewid: 2624145, reviewer: 'kristi'}
3rd December 2011:
i check this everyday to see if you've updated it. its on the first tab that opens when i open the internet ! i love it (:
Author's Response: oh gosh, thank you so much!!
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{reviewid: 2622120, reviewer: 'iluvdraco'}
28th November 2011:
Omfg ur stories amazing! I luuv ittt!!! But please can there not be any fake stupid dramam between vic and ted? Its sosososos good all my friends r reading it!
Author's Response: thank you! what do you mean by 'fake stupid drama?'
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{reviewid: 2621592, reviewer: 'MoonyistheBestMarauder'}
27th November 2011:
Hey, great job so far! I really love this story!!! Teddy/Vic pairings are one of my favorite, and this is brilliant! I like Tally, she's really awesome!
Author's Response: thank you so much! :)
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{reviewid: 2617735, reviewer: 'cheeni'}
19th November 2011:
awesum awesum...and i loved d joke.!!!keep writing!! and post fast.!
Author's Response: thanking you :)
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{reviewid: 2617232, reviewer: 'kristi'}
17th November 2011:
i think its cute with teddy and tori in the end!
Author's Response: thanking you :)
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{reviewid: 2617061, reviewer: 'Bluestreakspirit'}
17th November 2011:
Nice! That joke was very lame. FYI. Kthnxbyee:)
Author's Response: yeah, the fact it was lame was kinda the point. thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2613698, reviewer: 'Loony_Scorpy'}
9th November 2011:
That was awesome! Or should I say totally judias guays ;P haha I really love how Teddy's hair changes with his moods, it is really interesting, and funny! For the potions seating arrangement I was like yep Vic and Ted are definitely going to be next to each other, but no stupid Melanie got in the way. Haha I love that Teddy was jealous (I think) of the attention everyone (ie. Vic) gave the teacher! Unless there is some big thing going on there :o haha I don't know :P oh just one thing, you just need to make sure your tenses stay the same as you swap them around a bit - not that I can talk :P but yeah, I don't mind but I thought you might want to know :P anywhooo I loved the little bit you put in there with Neville and Luna! It /was/ kinda sad though D: ooh and do we find out (total mind blank of her name)'s real parents are? Or are they just some randoms? Haha Well I need to sleep so I'll finish up :P I can't wait for more because your story is totally awesome ;D
Author's Response: oh wow thank you!! And i don't know if we will find out her real parents, i'll have to see where it goes :)
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