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Review #1, by PaulaTheProkaryote Becoming Malfoy

4th April 2017:
Hey there! Im here to make sure Ravenclaw wins the CTF at HPFT/read your lovely stories.

Okay let's just address that I'm getting a strictly non-Gryffindor vibe from the Magical Law Enforcement Department. I mean just because the Minister was murdered doesn't mean it's fine to let anarchy break out! Or worse, cause the anarchy by setting the papers alight.

I love it. Just stunning everyone that couldn't handle themselves. Smart thinking. I hope the Aurors are all much more mature/sensible than general law enforcement.

It's true that his specific skill set would be fabulous for undercover shady government work BUT honestly it would have been great for undercover journalism too. Although undercover comedy writing probably not so much. Maybe for like a buzzfeed style section.

I feel like this kind of work day is what would lead up to Ron retiring to work at the joke shop. Im getting a strong i cant even vibe from him.

Do they have a vice minister or interim minister? I don't know about that kind of politics.


I feel like Teddy-comedian extraordinaire-might not be the best interrogator. I can't wait for it.

Well okay but if she's already friends with malfoy or accomplices or even just generally knows him how is he going to make his behavior foolproof enough that she wouldn't notice! I love it. I'm excited to see what happens.

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Review #2, by GeekAttack Epilogue - Wounds

28th January 2016:
I have never read any fic like this.Truly one of a kind: a masterful plot, characterization, and chemistry. I was happily surprised by this eventful fic- thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! That means the world to me. I'm glad you think I pulled it off well. Thanks again! And thanks for reviewing!

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Review #3, by DragonPoxPixie Becoming Malfoy

4th January 2016:
I am aware that it has been a while since you have written and posted this story, but I hope you will enjoy another review nontheless!

I have only read the first chapter, so I cannot say much about the plot except for the fact that a) OMG this is unlike anything I've seen before and b) this genre and combination of characters sounds so promising!

But why I really wanted to leave a review is this; I absolutely ADORE you're writing-style. It compliments the main character so well and as I reader I immidiatly get such a good sense on how his personality is. Also, it appears to fit his function amazingly well!

I am very eager to read more so for now I'll stick to just saying to please keep on writing, wether it is Harry Potter fanfiction or anything else. I'll be sure to leave a more complete review once I have finished reading your story.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. It's so kind of you to leave a review despite my long hiatus. I do still check in often, but alas, my muse for writing continues to fail me. Here's to hoping it comes back!

I do hope you enjoy the story, and I hope to hear from you again! Thank you so much!!

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Review #4, by Harry The Lesser of Two Evils

31st August 2015:
Why didn't Rose inform Harry if Ron was being tortured? He was head auror, he could have sent Peakes to Azkaban.
How come Hermione didn't notice the scars on Ron's body and if she did how can she keep quiet about it?

Why did Ron never wonder where he got the scars from? And the pain. He may have been obliviated but that wouldn't spare him the pain of torture!

Since when does Harry give up without a fight when his own neice was clearly framed for a murder?

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Review #5, by Renee2001 Epilogue - Wounds

24th March 2015:

Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! What great feedback. :) Thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by Renee2001 Breakable

23rd March 2015:
Dittany not Dissany.

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Review #7, by Renee2001 Full Moon Rising

23rd March 2015:
You can't conjure food. food is the first of Gamp's five laws to elemental transfiguration. OBVIOUSLY!

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Review #8, by snufflesthedog Epilogue - Wounds

26th June 2014:
I thought this was a great story, and I became completely hooked! The mystery was resolved really nicely, and I thought that it was an amazing plot, and a very original idea. Very funny at some points, too!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always appreciate input! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)

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Review #9, by Amy Epilogue - Wounds

22nd April 2014:
This was absolutely incredible!! Best fan fic I've probably ever read!! So much feeling in it - you are a great writer!!!

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Review #10, by woody12 Becoming Malfoy

13th February 2014:
This is such a cool and creative idea! I love it!! I love Teddy Lupin! He's my favorite from the New Generation!! I'm really excited to keep reading!

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Review #11, by nutellugh Epilogue - Wounds

6th September 2013:
I really, really love this story.

This last chapter deserves a lot more reviews!

The mystery is very-well done, and I love the Teddy/Rose shipping. I'm a huge Scorpius/Rose shipper, but this changed my mind a bit.

And ohmygosh, I just found out that Jimmy Peakes is an ACTUAL CANON character. When I read this, I thought he was an OC, and later on, I was doing this trivia thing-y where you name 200 HP characters, I saw the answers that I missed and I saw him: JIMMY PEAKES.

Haha, you do know a lot of HP, since Peakes was a very minor character.

Anyways, amazing story!

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Review #12, by x3CherryWatermelonx3 Becoming Malfoy

30th January 2013:
I'm really intrigued on where this story is going to go... Guess I better read on to find out! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad this story caught your interest, and I hope you stay with it! Hope to hear again from you soon! Thanks for the review.

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Review #13, by mashforever Epilogue - Wounds

13th November 2012:
I have to say that, that was the most perfect ending you could have possibly created! Thank for you a fantastic read!

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Review #14, by Sam Epilogue - Wounds

27th October 2012:
Lovely ending :) I have enjoyed this story so much. Thank you for your wonderful writing!

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Review #15, by Bluebell_Flames Epilogue - Wounds

27th October 2012:
I finish this story with tears in my eyes and absolutely none of my uni essay written! (But that's a good thing, honest!) Amazing story, you make the characters and all their emotions so realistic and very human. And somehow you've combined this with a twisting plotline that kept me guessing until the end, brilliant! Also a huge congratulations on the Dobby, it was definitely deserved! Keep up the writing :D

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Review #16, by Bluebell_Flames Day 43

27th October 2012:
The music choice for this chapter was PERFECT! It really added yet another dimension to your amazing writing :)

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Review #17, by AriesGirl40 Epilogue - Wounds

25th October 2012:
Still the best mystery of 2012 :) I think I followed this story since the beginning, congratulations on a win, I think you know I deffinately voted for you in your category.

You worked very hard to make this story interesting, that the people inside had life and that in the end they don't fade away, but continue to live on in their world working hard to extinguish their personal demonds while living together in happiness. The past is behind them, but when it seeps through to the present they comfort one another and work through it a step at a time.

I liked this ending, not all mushey and perfect, just very human and realistic. I give you a Bravo, well done and a standing ovation :)

I will be on the lookout for something new from you, I'm going to miss not being on my toes thinking through a new chapter.

See you soon!

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Review #18, by Hannah Epilogue - Wounds

24th October 2012:
Awwee,yay! I loved this story!Great job!:)

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Review #19, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Epilogue - Wounds

24th October 2012:
That was such a sweet ending. I especially love that everything was magically 'fixed' and okay between them after what happened.

This was such an amazing story, I've loved reading it from start to finish, and I will miss waiting for updates. :)



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Review #20, by AriesGirl40 The Lesser of Two Evils

13th October 2012:
Awesome chapter, now all Teddy needs is an old fashioned button hook and I think he might be able to dress himself :)

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Review #21, by rez The Lesser of Two Evils

13th October 2012:
wow that felt short, maybe cause it feels like I've been waiting for this for ages! This story has come so far and im so sad it's over but it was a good run and you should be proud :)

bit of a fluffy chapter, a lotta mush but I guess was necessary after all the heavy drama, which was amazing btw, I loved every bit of it and you're really really very good at writing this sort of thing, even in the seer wew! speaking of which, how's the sequel coming along? I was really looking forward to reading more of that and its been quite a while... but really, thank you for making the effort to update regularly, it makes it so much easier to keep up with the actual story and it's really sweet of you to make such an effort

keep it up! love your work!

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Review #22, by Money A New Beginning

12th October 2012:
dude your updates were pretty fast :P
what happened? :P
please please update
been so long :/

It feels like I am waiting for a train at a bus station :P

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Review #23, by bester_jester A New Beginning

9th October 2012:
Great chapter. In a way, I'm glad that physically Teddy isn't fully recovered/might never be - would have been really unrealistic if he was better straight away!

The resolution was great, but Merlin I want to see interaction between Rose and Teddy haha

Thanks so much for the update!

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Review #24, by AriesGirl40 A New Beginning

1st October 2012:
Yea! Now thats the way to forgive and forget. Starting out with a fresh slate was a very good idea.
Maybe Percy will win in the next election.

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Review #25, by lowdivejenny A New Beginning

30th September 2012:
Words can't describe how awesome things are turning out to be but I'm not satisfied. Not that I'll ever stop wanting more but still please update!

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