i didnt like it, it was not authentic Report Review
This is a very clever story! The colours were well explained and put into a context that I have never really thought of before. I liked how Godric and Salazar are quipping at one another, and the reference to Jesus being sold out for silver. It was a very good touch! I also really liked how the language of the story was old fashioned- it was really nice, but at the same time, it was still easy to read! Plus, the banner is absoloutely stunning!
Well done on this story! XD
LeanneAuthor's Response: thank you so much. this is a lovely review and I am so happy that you found it a nice story to read. I am also blown away by the banner, completely unexpected.
Thanks, this has brightened my day Report Review
That was powerful! I love the concept an it is beautifully written... You could expand it a little, however it is lovely as it is. 9/10
AdaAuthor's Response: I found it hard to go much further. But thank you all the same. I enjoyed writing it. Report Review
that was cute. :D and the banner is really amazing.Author's Response: i know right. i wasn't even expecting that and when I saw it I was like wow this is amazing.
Thanks for the review. Report Review
Really great! I love how it all makes sense and it's very unique! It's also very well-written!!!Author's Response: thank you i had fun writing it and i love the hidden meanings in things so I thought that I would see where the choice of colours led me. Report Review
Oh wow! I thought that was so clever/interesting the way they chose the colors. The reasoning made sense. I always wondered if everything would have been different if they hadn't chosen different colors, if all that showed everyone was in a different house is a small badge or something.Author's Response: I have just had the hugest fan girl moment ever.
I have read your story life according to georgina millie k and now you have read mine...
I'm really glad that you liked it, the thought had been floating around for a while and I was just board one day and got down to writing it. Report Review
Great idea of a story... it seemed that the colors were very well thought out. (:
~KhanhAuthor's Response: thanks, it started as a mind map. I realised that everything has to have an origin and I thought that the colours would not have a mundane reason behind them. Report Review
I'm actually really impressed by this. I would have never thought of this, and the reasons behind the colours. It takes a lot of thought.Author's Response: thanks, i did a mind map and i had it knocking around for a long time. I'm also feeling rather nostalgic at the moment so I poured that into it as well Report Review
That was good. I'm really impressed by how well it's written. 9/10Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it. it was an interesting piece to write Report Review
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