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Review #1, by Ellie Treacle Tart and Hand Gestures

15th August 2011:
Wow! I really enjoyed reading this, I smiled, I frowned (at Tracy) and laughed.

Really good one! Love it!

By the way, I loved the Rainbow the floppy Nerdfighting sheep! It's hard to find a story here that references Nerdfighteria!

You just made my day.

Author's Response: OMG a fellow Nerdfighter!!!

Thanks so much for this awesome review :) This is my first attempt at a predominate humor fic, so I'm glad you liked it!!!

DFTBA!
PP


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Review #2, by flufff Treacle Tart and Hand Gestures

15th August 2011:
That was so good! The part where Tracy is talking about her future kids is hilarious. And "Rainbow the floppy nerdfighting sheep," that's SO CUTE! And James when he says its his favorite toy... awww. This was probably the cutest one-shot I've ever read. Except for Tracy, I mean. She was just creepy. Plus, your writing is great! Love all the description, and I'll definitely read more from you!

Also, if you wouldn't mind, could you read&review my ff "Darkest Night"? It's a Dramione, so I don't know if you're really into that, but if you ever have some time to kill then I'd appreciate it if you took a look! Thanks! :D Keep writing ~ flufff

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review!!

Tracy is the kind of person who has their entire life planned out down to the curtains in her future mansion (a delicate stripped off white/tan). So it was only natural that she already have her kids named. XD

Rainbow!! It would be my favorite toy too!! Hehehe

I really tried to make this as cute as possible. i wanted something that was mostly humor, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

As for your story, I don't as a general rule read dramione, mostly because I think Hermione wouldn't be able to fall in love with someone who just stood by and watched her be tortured (no matter how many times he apologized and no matter what excuses he used). But I'll def pass it on to some of my friends.

Thanks again for the review!!

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Review #3, by maskedmuggle Treacle Tart and Hand Gestures

15th August 2011:
Hehehe, I really loved this! So amusing to read! My favourite bits was James' excitement over seeing his childhood toy again, "Rainbow the floppy Nerdfighting sheep" - that made me laugh! I liked Tracy Jones too, and her characterisation was quite entertaining too! Sure girl, go have a child and name her "Sunchild Moonbeams Rainbow..Jones" :L

What a really interesting twist on how Sirius left his family! I like how you made it different to normal stories. The beginning conversation between James and Tracy was really interesting and just enjoyable to read. Great writing!

- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)

Author's Response: CHARLOTTE!

Thanks for the review!!!

Haha Rainbow was one of my favorite little things to write about in this fic!! I wanted to show a bit of James's childhood and I thought what better way to do it than with an adorable toy?

Tracy!! She was, by far, my favorite character to write EVER! She was mean and a little crazy, and totally on board with the whole hippie thing in the 70's with that baby name.

Yeah!! I wanted to read a different take on how Sirius ended up leaving, and I couldn't find one. Then I was like, 'well if it doesn't exist, I'm just going to have to write it.' This was the result. Glad you liked it. :)

Thanks again for the review!!





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