Oh sheesh! This was amazing! Very well written and interesting! I loved it! I think the time jumps worked really well, and the beginning drew my interest! It was very good!
Mike.Author's Response: Thank you :) time jumps are never my favourite so writing it was really odd for me, and this was written ages ago so it's a bit cringey for me now, but i'm glad you liked it and thanks again!
~Ria Report Review
This is lovely.
I love how the three different sections have totally different moods, and how descriptive your writing is!
10/10 :)Author's Response: Thank you so much :) The different moods were definately intenntional 'cause I wanted to show the whold journey, I'm so glad you noticed that! Report Review
*sob* I have tears! Wonderful little story!!! 10/10Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much! Glad you liked it :) Report Review
The story has been beautifully written. I love this story. I've been reading a lot of romance between other popular pairings but this is different. It feels like I can see the different side of the famous twins. It explains how George and Angelina ended up together. How their love and loss for Fred are really the things that brought them together. Love it very much. Well done..! Keep writing..! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much :D I really intended to make the twins romance different from the typical romance, a bit more... not childish but more adventurous I guess. Anyway thanks so much for the great review :) Report Review
This made me cry a tiny bit. It was very well written, and for your first one-shot I think it was great! The part in the beginning was really sweet, I liked the whole "if I was..." thing. Your writing shows a lot of potential, and I'd love to see more from you!
also... if you wouldn't mind, could you read&review my ff "Darkest Night"? Sorry if I sound like an ad :( But I would really appreciate it! It's a Dramione, but if you're not really into that then you don't have to! But thanks anyways! Keep writing! ~ flufffAuthor's Response: Awe? I mad you cry?... this is gonna sound terrible but that just made my day! (Not that you cried a bit but that my writing actually made someone react that much)
I'll check out your story as soon as I get the chance, I have a few others I have to review first but then I'll be sure to R&R yours. If you like Dramiones then you might want to check out my story 'No Simple Way Back'
Thanks again! Report Review
Great job on this! I love how you started this with Angelina expressing her doubts about her relationship with Fred [were they meant to be together] and then finished with the same concepts with her and George meaning to be together. It made the story feel like it came around full circle. I also have to say the way you wrote Angelina searching for Fred in the Great Hall came out excellent. I can definately see this playing out in my head! Good Job!
~GrimmerzAuthor's Response: Yay! thanks :) I'm glad you noticed that little circular plot going on, it's definately what I intended. Thanks again :D Report Review
Whoa. This was fantastic. Not that Fred dying was fantastic, but the way you portrayed Angelina and her love for Fred was. I particularly liked the beginning, it was fun and playful just the way I always imagined Fred and Angelina's relationship to be now that I think about it.Author's Response: Thank you! and no, Fred's death is very not fantastic, but I understand what you meant so thanks so much! This was always how I imagined Fred and Angelina too, I could never see Fred in anything but a light hearted romance. Anyway, thanks again :) Report Review
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