WOW this is amazing! i have read this story 3 times today and can't wait for your next chapter!

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I knew it was that vanessa character from the beginning, oh my god... every time you describe scorpius crying into someones shoulder, i picture draco crying in the bathroom in the half blood prince. i'm really enjoying these chapters and sorry for spamming you with my stupid reviews.

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where are the next chapters?

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Well... you've sort of became my favourite fanfiction author and i think this was a really good chapter. Really hard and soft and sad and happy at the same time.

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I just found this story a few days ago, and i read the whole entire thing! it was fantsatic!!! i love rose and scorp together, and you are doing a great job with the other characters as well!! i love all the crazy love messes and triangles and the square!! please keep writing more for this story! i have to know how it all ends! Thanks for writing so much already, keep it up!

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Please Please Please i want Chloe and Alex together!



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I like Scorpius POV. OMG hate Louis he is just so...ah :(
Byt the way this was the best chapter.

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oh poor rose. the emotion had disappeared from me. i think my heart just broke in two pieces, one bigger than the other that cradles it trying to piece themselves together with bandage and a cast that says, 'under construction'. it feels as though rose has created a whole in the ground and every day she digs deeper and deeper and deeper until this very moment she tripped up and fell head first six feet under. every time someone turns their back on her, the dirt is shovelled into that whole, thinking it would make things better but their really just putting her in the dark. excluded from all the love. abandoned from all the friendships. with a healing heart and dirt in her lungs. i just dont see her even bothering to breathe in the next chapter...



oh god sorry, just a bit of spoken word poetry. try reading it out loud.

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We walked in silence until he said, "So was she good?"

"Alex, my man," I said. "That's for me to know and you to never find out."

Hilarious! Love it!

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Dude, thank the fucking Merlin.

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HOLY CRAP! Oh the goodness. OH GAHD! I'm just like, "Ooh!" then i was "fuck fuck fuck!" this is amazing. shit this is hysterical!

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Really cool,love the end of chapter 1!

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It's brilliant! I can hardly keep a straight face. I like the pairings and i think that it's really great for someone so up tight like Hermione's daughter to get pregnant with her enimy's son... Oh god i need more...

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Well over 12 okays in the chapter... o3o

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Update soon! I love this story!

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Great chapter!:) You're a brilliant writer, really. I can't wait to find out more about the whole Alex/ Emily/ Al/ Chloe thing. Great job!

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Oh my, looks like things are getting rather complicated. I'm excited about Rose and Scorpius but I think that Emily, Alex, Chloe and Al are going to get through some things that are not that good...
Loving your story!

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I'm so happy that Rose and Scorpius are okay, I just really really love them together. As for Emily and Alex, I think that they've both done a few mistakes. It's obvious that Alex did, but Emily should just take a chance. I'm pretty sure that she 'll eventually figure that out. Great chapter!:)

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My Pandora must know what I'm reading, and where I am in my reading, because just when Rose is kissing Scorpius and he's still, Are you gonna kiss me or not came on. There is nothing better than hearing the perfect song for a story.

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hello :)
I absolutely love your story!
you write beautifuly and the story is so intresting and adorable and Scorp is so amazing!
when will you update another chapter???
thank you for writing the next generation so perfectly and please update...
:)

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When will there be mooore ! love this story so much x

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Whens the next chapter?

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Aww Scorpius is good with kids! :D

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I am officially in love with you, man! This chapter
made me laugh so much, and damn, was I grinning
all the time! :D
Though, I /think/ I would try to find you and kill you
if you don't update anytime soon. Because I am
dying to read what happens next!
Please update soon, awesomness!

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I really like what you've written, like really. But it's strange to read this after I've read a Rosius fic called "Delicate". (Have you read it?) And it had exactly the same story line. But what I thought what really weird is is that Scorpius and Rose used to dislike each other, turns out Scorpius always liked her though, and then Rose also becomes a fan of Scorpius. Weird. I think there should have been a chapter on their character development. So when they are around each other, the reader could feel more comfortable. Their characters, when they are together, seem under-developed.
Just my opinion. I love the story. :)

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