aw poor ginny =( haha don't worry about taking creative license on things like that. this was written very well, i like the way you portrayed lily, being sort of stubborn (which i wonder if she realized is very much like her mum =D).
congrats on a great one shot!

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I liked this; odd but it worked, especially for someone such as myself, who could never really get behind Harry/Ginny even though I can't ship him with anyone else.
Nicely written.

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I really enjoyed this! Sometimes a good Ginny bashing is just what I need...although I really am fond of her most of the time. Lorcan's part in this is amazing as well. Great story and I hope you do end up expanding on this. :)

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That was actually a pretty interesting read! I like how you portrayed Lorcan, I've never really read much with him in it, but I liked this a lot! When you say you'll expand on this... well, if you do I'll definitely read it. Great job! Hope to see more from you...

and, um, also... I'd really appreciate it if you'd read&review my fic "Darkest Night," its a Dramione. Don't know if you're into that, but if you ever get the time, I'd love to know what you thought of it! Thank you! x flufff

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I think the idea is good but it's so out of character for Ginny that I can't appreciate the ideas in the story. Seems like it would work far better with a different character so that it didn't seem like an OC put into Ginny's place just so you could have Lily have these feelings and this conversation.

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I liked this :) A lot, actually. Your Lorcan was great, I liked how you portrayed him as so different from his mother because everyone likes to portray the twins as male Luna's. I think in this fic you kind of captured the essence of a rocky adolescence and the precariousness of parent/child relationships really well. Not everyone gets on with their parents, and in Next Gen fic I don't think many people explore that avenue.

It was great! Please do expand on it ^^

Nisha/faerieall

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