Hey, okay here goes...

I haven't reviewed any chapter yet because I honestly couldn't stop reading. This is definitely one of my favourites because you've written it really well and it has a great plot. I especially like Pete's naive-ness it makes me crack up every time. I've written Sirius/OC fanfic it's not nearly as far as yours is though. Maybe you could check it out and give me some feedback?

xx favouriteness etc from petra all the way from New Zealand

Author's Response: Woo thanks! Was worried abouth the last chapter because of how long I'd left it :) I always worry mine lacks plot so that's good!
I'm always on the lookout for a good Sirius/oc so ill have a look :)

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I love your story, its amazing. Mia is such a great character and I cannot wait to see what happens with Sirius. Please update soon, when you get the time between exams and everything... :)

Author's Response: wooo almost finished next chappie as in will be in queue today :) thank you xx

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Great chapter - Jay is really cute :) one tiny thing - I thought James was meant to be on a date but then BAM, he is there at the snowball fight - just some minor confusion but otherwise great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! I know some of my earlier chapters are.iffy and will look through them/edit over summer

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I love your story. Mia is a great character and I can't wait to see what happens between her and Sirius. Keep up the great work! :)

Author's Response: Gracias! :P

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lol at shanice.. i've seen a lot of guys do that-- only, with cars. :P
and yeah, i noticed, but that's not a bad thing if you keep the main plot in mind so that the story doesn't rocket off course.
otherwise, random inspirations just make you and your story unpredictable in a nice way..
i'm loving mia more than ever these days and i wanna see more of an insight to pads feelings... othrwise the chapter is amazing!
update soon!
loyally,
fanna

Author's Response: I was thinking that.having a chappie soon which is probably going to be 75% sirius pov depending on how it works out :) thank you for the review xx

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hey there!
this story just keeps on getting more and more interesting!
mia is a wonderful character and i'm beginning to like her more and more each day...
and the i-don't-like-the-marauders issue wih jem sounds quite touchy.. i just hope they end it because of something relative, not because he was cheating on mia or something...because that's like- old news now.
anyway, i hope yo update soon!
adding you to my bag of favourites,
loyally,
fanna

Author's Response: thanks for the review :) yeah dont worry they definitely dont break up because of that.I know because ive already written the break up scene...but god knows when its going to happen! will try and update soon xx

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i don't think you'd have any doubts left by now that i'm hopelessly in LUV with this story!
i just luvvit!
please update soon!
i'm one permanent reader now!

Author's Response: getting a bit stuck on chapter 13 (im supersticious so convinced this is why) and at school but hopefully should have it posted in the next week or so. Thanks for reviewing all these chapters by the way! commitment :) xx

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reputation for what???
Man, I hate these cliffy's!
nice chapter!a bit fillerish, but nice.
I'm nearing the end of you updated list, so u better get you arse infront of the computer/laptop unless u wanna be avada kedavra'd in your sleep!

Author's Response: in case you don't notice I skip out a massive chunk of Mia/Jeremiah getting to know each other between this and chapter 12.thats just because those chapters would've been even MORE fillerish...sorry about the filler...necessary evil

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well, this just has to happen, doesn't it???
Can't say I liked the Sirius-and-the-mesie part. But then, you have to get some twists and turns to get a story going...so it's ok...
Well, reading on tO see see mia's reaction...

Author's Response: yeah sorry this was one of the "dodgy" chapters :S my baaddd

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Hm.
so now lils knows how she feels, but james has given up...
interesting...
reading on...

PS: I sympathize with the guy problem... It's always uncounted for! :)

Author's Response: AH i completely messed up with the whole Lily/James situation...was totally set on them getting together in the sixth year but I was reading Harry potter 5 when I was writing this and Harry gets told they get together in their seventh year and im trying to be accurate so massive curveball there :s awks

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hey, nice chapter!
i didn't see any mistakes.. or maybe i love this story too much to notice a mistake-- even if it's running around naked wearing dobby's tea cozy!
i loved this chapter and i'm growing more and more fond of this story day by day..
and
oh!
mia's hurt!
howz siruis gonna react to that?
i really loved how he told james to fuck off and let her stop the laps.. this shud be interesting...
well, lemme read on!

Author's Response: hehehe my story's interesting...thank god! ill just respond to your other reviews :)

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hmmm..
now i'm beginning to wonder why this story didn't get more reviews.
this was one interesting chapter!
so sirius is now beginning to like-like mia, but she's still a blunt axe..
oh well. lemme just read on and see what happens!
=)

Author's Response: whyy thanks no some of the chapters are a bit.dodgy shall we say.ironing out the creases etc.

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quoting prongs: "well, that was clever"
nice and easy way to get your way and leave the cassinova dumbstruck!
heheehe!
nice chapter... reading on..
i'll review soon!

Author's Response: aww its nice to wake up to all these reviews!

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hahahha! a silly sausage!
*shakes her head*
so, this chapter was another nice one!
can't write much... gotta read the other chapters.. :D

Author's Response: I dont even know where the end bit came from! was reading through saw the "you are what you eat" bit and was like boom...whether its funny or not i dont know :P

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heyya!
interesting chapter! i'm liking mia more and more by the minute! =D
yup, i thing i'm definitely one permanent reader!

Author's Response: She is a bit likeable...i dont know whether she's too predictable but working on ironing out a few creases in chapters 12/13ish

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hey, nice start! just telling you before i move on to the next chapter... if i like how the story goes, then you've just gained a permanent loyal reader with a hell lot of reviews to boot!
=D

Author's Response: haha thanks!! will be good to have :D

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Ah! Reali good :) loving Sirius xx

Author's Response: Good to know :)

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I LOVE YOUR STORY! It's one of the first fan fictions I ever read - and it was brilliant! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU X

Author's Response: Aww thanks :) reviews really help especially at the moment.having slight writers block x

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:D love this chapter.so swet when mia wakes up with sirius :D.my favourite part!
anyways YAY lily finally admits!haha
yeah so cool chapter!

lOony

Author's Response: aww thanks :) loved writing this chapter

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I really love this story! The first few chapters had some confusing grammar, but its way better now. More! More! please :)

Author's Response: i know! my grammar is shocking for being english :S being trying to work on it though.point anything out if you see it!

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Loved it. no other way to explain:) keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Yey :) thanks keep reading

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The best story EVER!
Did that help? Well then update ;D
Please?
124365870/10

Author's Response: haha thanks :)
ill update as fast as I can!

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i really like it! i wouldn't have guessed this is your first fan fic?!
liking the story so far.drawn up well
cant wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! About to post 2nd chapter to be validated.would've done it earlier but got a surprise holiday :) x

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