Are you going to update?! I can't wait to see where this is going? :D I love the playful banter between James and Sirius and I'm also curious about the way Lily and Sirius interact - even while they supposedly hate each other, there are still signs of the brother-sister relationship they'll have later on.
One little thing I noticed was your grammar and spelling - it could be improved in places - but other than that, I loved it!
Please update soon!
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I think your off to a good start to this story. I did notice that Sirius called Jame's mother by her first name and thought that he wouldn't really do that. Then you mention that Lily was told by Mrs Potter to call her Martha. So I came to the conclusion that she'd done the same thing with Sirius. 9/10 and plz update soon. Adding to favs. Report Review
interesting story! seems to get really exciting so I'm already looking forward to the next chapter :)
liked it a lot! great work!Author's Response: aww thank you! It means a lot that u liked it :) and so glad that u r looking forwards to the next chapter. I will try to make it more interesting...thanks again! :) ^_^ Report Review
This is a great story! I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate that you reviewed and don't worry I won't take long with the second chapter.:D :) Report Review
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