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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 Three Years Later

14th September 2011:
Well you certainly know how to pull the unexpected out of the hat. That death eater attack threw me for twelve (never mind a six). Great chapter and 10/10. Plz update soon, I'd like to know why they attacked in the first place.

Author's Response: I can answer that now as it's unimportant to the plot. They attacked because Gwen's sources knew that Salazar was going to be in a muggle area that night. It was time for the Death Eaters to come out of hiding so they decided to act now!

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #2, by Bookworm045 The Next Voldemort

25th August 2011:
Oh, goodness. First; sorry it took so long to review! Second. I love this story! Salazar is so cute and I love his aversion to being the nest Dark Lord and his reaction to being a Puff and your prompt sort of surprised me. I forgot that I'd given you such a silly one and it just left me laughing because of how well you had it fit in there. Great start, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thank you for joining my challenge! (:

Author's Response: I'm glad you love this story! It was a lot of fun to write and I have tons of ideas for it.

Next chapter will be written soon! Hopefully...

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 The Next Voldemort

20th August 2011:
I love the start of this story. I like the sound of your main character he seems to emminate what real life can sometimes be like.
I have to give you 10/10 and ask you to update soon.

Author's Response: You love it? Yay! I'm glad you like Salazar and you think it's realistic! That's always something I strive for.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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Review #4, by Levana The Next Voldemort

19th August 2011:
Hahaha that's funny! Can't wait for the rest! :D

Author's Response: Yay first review!

Thanks for reviewing!


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