I'm very sorry I haven't reviewed this earlier! Anyways, great job, and nice start with this story! Thanks a lot for participating in my challenge! :)Author's Response: That's ok as I'm sorry for not responding lol :)
Due to the House Cup review task I have seen this review and thanks a lot. The challenge was great fun :P Report Review
Oh wow! I'm loving this :D
Genevieve is my name and may I say, you're basically describing me! With the whole intelligent, beautiful thing... Have you met me?
Haha, only joking. Loving the story though. Love your writing style, pretty fun and bubbly. Keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It means a lot! :)
Your name's Genevieve? Cool!
I'll put up the next chapter soon hopefully. Hope you keep reading and reviewing! :D Report Review
well, good chapter. i hope u bring in some good humour and dialouges for the next chaps. gud luck...
by da way i liked both the titles..Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I will hopefully put up the next chapter soon. Keep reading and reviewing :) Report Review
Love it its so cute i like how you make hugo clumsin update soon love to heard what happens nextAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I will update soon. Keep reading and reviewing :D Report Review
Hugo. The forgotten Kid. I like that he's not awesome and more than a bit awkward. Also, you're not overdoing the awkwardness. I thought this was a funny beginning, though a bit short. I'd suggest making the part where he sees Genevieve for the first time a bit longer, perhaps giving a bit backstory. For now I'm a bit curious how it's possible that he has ever seen her before and I'm patient enough to wait for to you explain in following chapters, but I somehow feel it would be better if you'd tell is straightaway.
Besides that and the length, everything was perfect. You've set the scene and I'm curious for more. Adding to favs.
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house: slytherin]Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I'm going to post the next chapter soon and I'll probably get a beta so I can sort the little things out. Thanks again :D Report Review
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