Nice first chapter. You do a good job of introducing characters without it being overkill. 10/10 Cassie :) Report Review
This story is really cute, i'm really enjoying it. The only criticism I have is to ensure that you properly edit your story in case of typos, but that's just me nit-picking. Keep writing, and keep updating :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, I'm extremly lazy when it comes to searching fr typos. Report Review
this story is really sweet and the fluff was very nice. i enjoyed it alot well done :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Continue please x! Looks like its gonna be good + i havent followed a fanfic in ages :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm almost done with the next chapter. Report Review
Cute. I love it! It's amazing and abnormally sweet. James and lily are amazing! Keep it upAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. Report Review
I like it. Continue Please ? Hope you bring Snape into the story .Author's Response: Thank you! And don't worry Snape's going to be appearing really soon. :) Report Review
Good job! I hope you continue this story!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Report Review
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