Ooh, I really like this! Can't wait to read more! Report Review
i simply love it please go on! Report Review
Hi there!! :)
Great story here! Really very interesting, and I've never read anything quite like it. You did a good ship for this challenge!
You picked a wonderful name for the Snape. Really very JKR-ish! So many OC names are so common and really not HP suited, but you did so good with that! Really awesome job!
This was actually a kinda sad piece! But that's okay! I like sad and angsty pieces. I feel so bad for Astoria in this piece, but what's good is that we know they marry! So yay! Happy day!
This was such an interesting story. Really very interesting! And great take on things. It would have been so cool if it had gone somewhat like this!
And you developed Astoria's character very well throughout the story. Not by dwelling on her traits, but by getting along with the story and elaborating as you went! Awesome job!
And I also want to apologize for me taking awhile to reach your entry to my Supernatural challenge, but my goal is to get to it today! Thank you so much for entering, and also thank you so much for being such a faithful reader and reviewer to The Seer! It means a lot to me, and I had to come return the favor!
Thanks! Great story. See you around!
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