No! Why is there a cliffhanger sort of ending? :P Kidding, I liked all the drama! You do make me insanely curious who the 'gruff voice' belongs to, and whether she died? or not? Tell me!
I loved the story! The plot was really good. I can imagine this random girl talking to the Minister and trying to exchange information for a plan. You described her actions really well. The only thing that I want to point out is - isn't there any security for the Minister? Other than that, great story!
- maskedmuggle, Ravenclaw :)Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review!! This means so much to me because this story is definitely out of my comfort zone so I was nervous putting it up!
As for the security detail, she got into the ministry just like Harry, Ron, and Hermione did, undercover. I could've made that a little more clear though..hahah!
Thanks again, you are soo wonderful!! :) Report Review
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