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Review #1, by DraconisScarlet3792 Believers

4th February 2014:
I like the premise. If you have enough to expand into a couple more chapters, I would do that. You write well and it could be very enjoyable reading. Two comments, when you use proper names, please capitalize them, this is not a text and proofread or have your story read. Do that and you will get better ratings.

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