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Review #1, by :D Day Off

11th August 2011:
A very good start. The dialogue at the beginning of the chapter already sets a view of the characters involved. We see that there are three friends, and the main character already has a problem that we want to know about. It is not fully revealed to us, which makes us want to know more. When we find out the problem, other questions arise and these will not be answered until we read on. So it captures the reader's eye very well. Not too close to the original JK novels. It has it's own originality. So well done!

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