Beautiful story. I loved this. And you got the characters perfect as we know them.
I enjoyed this very much. Great job. Report Review
This is such a beautiful blend of stories and song. You showed so many stories all so well, it's beautiful. You showed sadness, pain, and happiness so well. I loved this peice!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback!
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Omg this was absolutely BEAUTIFUL. I nearly cried, and I promise you, I am heartless, I NEVER cry. The emotion that each character was feeling was really evident, from the anger to the hurt to the love to the peace... Very well-written and intriguing. I'm really glad that I took the time to read through this, I am definitely adding this story to my list of favorites.Author's Response: Oh my gosh thank you so much for taking the time to post your review. IT just made my day :)
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Hi :) I really like this. I know that every story has to end somewhere but I always wondered what would've happened had JKR carried on the last book for just a day or two more. I personally felt it would have given more closure, but I think you just provided it :)
Just one comment: in the section about George and Angelina (which I think is a good basis for their future relationship, by the way), the eleventh line should be 'you're' and not 'your'. Easy to overlook, I know, but I thought you caught the emotions perfectally. Well done :DAuthor's Response: Yeah I just went back a re-edited the entire thing. Those kind of grammatical mistakes drive me up the wall and I certainly appreciate you pointing it out.
Thanks so much for your comments. I myself have wondered about what happened after the Battle so I enjoyed writing this, and I'm glad you liked it.
I, of course, will return the favor.
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Another good story, you really put in alot into how the characters are feeling.
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this really captured all of the thoughts of so many characters, and i like how you kept true to them. really good!
i loved the george/angelina part :)Author's Response: I appreciate your review so much, sorry it's taken me so so long to respond. I will certainly return the favor, and as always, I love the feed back. Report Review
I love this ! So realistic.
This should have much more views ! :D
10/10Author's Response: You have no idea how much I appreciate your review. I love all feedback, and if I can, I shall certainly repay the favor. Report Review
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