perfect!! your story is exactly the kind of fanfiction i've been looking to read for ages!

great job! :)

Author's Response: So glad you like it! It's my first fanfiction, so it's a little shaky, but i hope you enjoy it!!! :)


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I just started reading your story today and its really good! i love how theres always more drama going on all the time! rose and scorp are my favorite couple! i cant wait 2 read more so you must update soon! until next time

~Jacklyn~

Author's Response: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! its so great to know ppl like my writing, you have no idea! im so glad you like it, and I'm going to update pretty regularly after the vacation period (possibly before then if my second chapter for Lemondrops and Lilys is validated in time) its' pretty short, but again, I'm really glad you like it :)

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KEGAN YEAH SHE ROCKS. YOU GO GIRL!

Author's Response: so do you! Love you!

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awesome. job. you're a wonderful writer!

Author's Response: aw thx darlin!

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so you're awesome. love the suspense, xmas will certainly be interesting. mwahhahahaha

Author's Response: u kno it! gona kick ass!


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kegan seems awesome! can't wait for more.

Author's Response: wel she was kinda based on my real life best friend so...of course shes awesome!

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uhm... awesome. love your story girl. =D

Author's Response: thanks so much! sry i havnt been on i a while (but u knew that) so i havnt been to r/r but i did take ur advice on that little situation thats comming up in my story and made some editations so yeah...

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uhm... you're awesome. btws my next chapter is up! =) love ya

Author's Response: I SHALL READ AND RATE! btw, how awesome is quidditch? i mean seriously! best thing ever!

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yay an update =) congrats girlie!

Author's Response: thx yahabeeby!

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i like this story. its cool to see a russian rather than just another american, you know? the language is cool. nice touch.
keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm so glad you like the russian!

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your story makes me happy!!! =D

Author's Response: u make me happy =D

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i think that your story has some good concepts, but being honest, you really need to expand EVERYTHING. chapters need to be longer, characters further developed. also, your sex confusion pregnancy plot is approaching (i know this is harsh) soap opera territory. which isn't always bad. but really, just keep it somewhat in the realm of reality.
that being said, you have a good writing style with a lot of potential and the humor in the story is really great.
good luck, i really do like the story and want you to do well.

Author's Response: back handed compliment right there...i shall return it...THANKS BITCH!

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russian is awesome. i love your fic darling

Author's Response: russian is awesome thats why i put it in there


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Author's Response: um...ok...i guess...?

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uhm you're cool.
=D
xoxo

Author's Response: as are you!!!

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you are amazinggg
=)

Author's Response: thanks =)


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