Reading Reviews for Semele Perdita
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by kick ass Life or Something Like It

1st April 2004:
that was a good start but sometimes it gets confusing because you cant tell who is talking. every pronoun needs a clear anticedent

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Review #2, by ShellyV929 Life or Something Like It

31st March 2004:
Not bad.... can't wait to see how you cook this one up... please continue...

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