I'm wondering what will happen now that Dumbledore found out... Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Report Review
The kiss... Report Review
Awww she met with Rod :)
I've always though Rod to be a very underrated character, and I love reading about him. I thinkg you got him perfectly!Author's Response: Thank you so much Pen!! :D Report Review
Interesting start. I like the interaction between the sisters, I'd like to see where this goes. Report Review
i was right, it is as good as the first two!
keep it up!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much phoenix!!!
It really means a lot!!! Report Review
more action! it's kinda boring.
good thoughAuthor's Response: I have to admit i agree with you. I have already written some later chapters with much more action in them, but i need to connect them with the first chapters somehow.:/ Anyway, i am planning to have a big twist on the next chapter or something, and i really hope you will like the next ones :) Thank you for your review! Report Review
it seems tto be working well and i hope that im right and the next chapter will be as good as the first 2!!!
keep it up!!!
he wasnt to smily!Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I'm so happy you liked it!
As for Rodolphus, I don't know, I thought I made him a little too gentle and romantic and all, but now I actually like how the whole thing turned out to be...
Once again thank you for the review! Report Review
i think its really good.
you can really understand the plot and its well writen.
keep it up, i can't wait for the next chapter!!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
I'm glad you liked it, it is my first atempt with Bellatrix's story, and I really think she is a tricky one to write...Probably because she has such a complicated personality...
Once again thanks for the review!It really means a lot! :D Report Review
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