HarryPotterFanfiction.com :: 80,000 Harry potter stories and podcasts

3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Megan Black

27th September 2011:

Hello!! I like where this is going and the summary sounds awesome. The one thing I thought was a little rough was the POV changes. I wasn't really sure who's POV it was at some parts. But other than that, I really enjoyed it.

I especially liked all of the different characters introduced right away. It seems like this story will be complex with a couple of different plots and conflicts, and I absolutely love that kind of stuff.

I loove the title of the story btw. It's just so mysterious.

Oh and I'm confused about the end of the last chapter. Does Sirius like Remus? I can't tell, but it seems like you are hinting at it.

P.S. Thanks soo much for reviewing my one-shot! It's the first story I've put out for the public, so it means a lot to me.

Author's Response: thank you for readind!
He may do ;) You never know with Sirius! :D
Thanks!

Report Review

Review #2, by June Knight

The Train

18th September 2011:

I'VE GOT A BRAND NEW COBINE HARVISTER! Had to do that... sorry.

Nice story so far, write more or I may die

Author's Response: Hahahah okay I shall. Stupid thing.I have three chapters, but the second is just being validated. Gonna start on a Teddy fanfic :) I'm gonna find your fanfics too :)

Report Review

Review #3, by TaylaBraxton

The Train

22nd August 2011:

Cool Story, feel really sorry for Remus though =(

Report Review

If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login