Hi there! :)
This is SUCH an interesting take on the story! Wow, the title really does say it all. What if...? And it's so intriguing.
I'm so excited to see where you take this really, as I've never quite seen anything like this. It's like, will Tom let his best friend be a Mudblood? If it is, how would that change the way he views the world and the future decisions he will make? It's kind of mind boggling, actually. :P
But anyways! Brilliant job with this first chapter.
Haha, I can understand why Dumbledore would tell him to make friends with her. ;) Especially since she's a Mudblood. He already has a feeling that he's somewhat bad, and maybe he can send him off in the right direction.
Such a curious story and nicely done! Great job. :)
Forum Name: Phoenix_Flames
House: HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Aw, thankyou, the next chapter will be posted soon. I've wrote it down in a little notebook so it's easier to write it on here:) Report Review
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