Okay...I never give 10/10...but you deserve it. This story is amazingly well written, especially for fanfiction. I enjoyed the time I spent reading. The way you wrote the story reminded me of how the books are actually written. You put just the write amount of emphasis in just the right places, and you didn't cuss too much, which I appreciated. There was also a good amount of things happening besides the main romance. I especially love Professor Wright. He made the story. I'm so glad I clicked on this one to read; thank you so much for taking the time to write and type. I know it takes a lot of time. Keep up the good work, and don't let the Muggles get you down!Author's Response: You are awesome.
Honestly, in fear of sounding cheesy, you've brought me a lot of happiness on a day where I had 4 exams! Haha. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Ahh you've given me the nicest compliments ever :p
Professor Wright is the coolest, isn't he? I appreciate your comment because I feel he's an underrated character ;)
Again, thank you soso much! It means a lot. And, regarding your last comment, you too! Report Review
I don't know why, but Rose is very unlike able in these past few chapters. She has no right to be mad at Scorpius, Lizzie or Fabian. She's the one who's kissing somebody else when she's already dating Fabian!!Author's Response: Oh, I totally agree! Her flaws really came out in the past few chapters... She's been a bit of a hypocrite lately, which is why someone lets her know just that in the next chapter :)
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I loved this story!! It was amazing!!Author's Response: You're so sweet! Thanks so much for all your reviews, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story :) ♥ Report Review
Finally! They are together at last!Author's Response: Psh yeah they are!
True love always prevails, my dear ;) Report Review
Urrg. Rose and Scorpius need to get together! I can't believe Scarlet reacted that way!Author's Response: I know! This chapter is just brimming with tension :P
Ah, that's what I love about Scarlett... she's so crazy and unpredictable :P
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Yay! Rose and Scorpius are friends again. And finally we got to know what his family problems were :)Author's Response: Woohoo! :D A happy chapter all round :P
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Whoa. I was not expecting that. Poor Rose!!Author's Response: Poor Rose indeed.
Thank you for reviewing! Nice to know I still have readers even after the story's over :D Report Review
I've been reading up in till now and I think that this story is awsome, My favourite couple is Rose and Scorpius so I'm a tuff critic. GOOD JOB!Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks so much! Rose and Scorpius are just such an awesome ship, right? :'D ♥ Report Review
this was amazing!
im so happy everything worked out!(:
congratulations on finishing your first story ever!(:Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you liked it!
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SO MANY FEELS! If you made a sequel I would love you forever. I know you're busy, but maybe sometime?Author's Response: just can't contain all these feels~
ahaa I am considering a sequel! I just need a decent idea first! :) and preferably an idea that doesn't primarily consist of RETURN OF THE EVIL BOYFRIEND-SNATCHING SCARLETT, heh :P
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Aw I was in tears! Such a fab story! Loved the ending, goodbyes are always so hard :'( but you wrote really well and I am gonna miss checking every day to see if you've updated! Please write a sequel! Thanks for being awesome! Loved it loved it loved it!!Author's Response: Really! Aw! I can't believe I brought someone to tears haha :')
I mayyy do a sequel, still not sure at the moment :)
You are so lovely, thank YOU for being awesome :)
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You did leave a good opening for a sequel sometime. I'm really going to miss this story. I think I reviewed atleast almost every chapter. Your an easy going author to review for. Do well in school, and I hope to see somthing new started in the future :)Author's Response: I reckon it's always good to keep my options open!
I'm going to miss you as a reviewer! It really means a lot that you reviewed so much, so thank you :)
I'm try my best! Thanks so much, hope to see you around again! ♥ Report Review
I love fluff! haha amazing as akways! Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Hey, me too! haha :P
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Amazing chapter. I am so glad this chapter was light hearted and nothing went wrong! Fabian is soo cute! And I loved the rose-scorpius bit :) can't wait for the next one xxAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you!
Haha yeah! It was practically drama free - for once. :)
Ah, Fabian. Such a cutie :3 And of course, Scorose ♥ ;D
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Oh, i think this is a good beginning to your story. I liked seeing rose and scorpius as friends in this already and that she had been hoping for him to ask her to the ball and he never did. I think the scene at the ball reminded me a lot of the scene between hermione and ron at the yule ball, i could even see hermione yelling while reading about rose doing it. Im interested to see where your story will take us and what will happen to rose and scorpius now that she has yelled at him. Altogether, this was a great beginning and i look forward to reading more.
~slytherinchica08~Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much! Yeah, the Yule Ball scene served as inspiration for this story haha :)
Rose and Scorpius have a, how shall I put this... /interesting/ journey ahead of them ;)
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Awww... a last dance with an old friend. That was a memory maker. Loved Rose getting caught in the bushes with Scorpius. Hope it does make the year book. Congrats on the reads, this story has been awesome! I'm going to miss this story. You will have to notify us of your plans with your final chapter. Spoilers bring us back if you plan a continuation of this saga or something a little different. I write down and check back often for new stories.
See you soon with the final chapter :)Author's Response: Haha, I think Bertie will make sure that cheeky shot gets slotted in somewhere ;)
Thank you, it's been so fun to write and I'm gonna miss it too!
I'm unsure about a sequel or whatever right now, but hopefully I will have decided by the time the next chapter comes around :P
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That was such an amazing chapter! I Personally don't like how distrusting rose is, but ah well :) love scorpius soo much!! Can't wish for the next chapter!Author's Response: Aw, well thank you very much!
Hah, I don't like how distrusting she is, either. I doubt even she herself likes how distrusting she is... eh, what can you do. :/
Aw I'm glad you love Scorpius so much, despite his faults :P
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Yay! They finally got together! I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: WOOP! Only took, y'know, 20 chapters or so... :) Next chapter coming real soon!
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*Multiple head banging on keyboard that looks something like 'gnnhndhhfasghhghdededededeikhewoj'* Oww. I just gave myself a headache. /:
Aha! I knew Scarlett wasn't completely evil! But I think she scares me more now... O.o
THERE ACTUALLY DATING NOW! WOHO!! :D If they weren't such idiots, they would have been dating for a while now... Oh well! Better late than never!Author's Response: Ouch! I hope the keyboard is okay. And your head, too. :D
Ahaha she scares you? Hmm. I think she scares me too, actually. :/
Yayayay! Happy times!
Yeah, it's a shame they only got together at the very end of their school-life, isn't it? Silly Rose. Silly Scorpius.
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This story is really good. I like it a lot. I wonder what's up between Scorpius and Scarlett. Please update soon!!Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it!
You'll find out what's up with them very soon :-D
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That awesome moment when I'm listening to the song "To Dance Again" from AVPM right as I read the part about seeing Voldy come back and tap dance. I almost peed.Author's Response: HAHAHA that's perfect. omg.
OMG!!! This chapter was amazing!! Is rose just being over-obsessive, or is scorpious having troubles letting go of Scarlett? Agh What is goin on?! But the next chapter is already written? Update update update! :)Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much!
I guess you'll find out soon, in the next chapter! Mwahaha! :D
Okay, so the next chapter is, like, 99.7% written. Just needs a bit of editing. But I really want to update my other story first, which hasn't been updated in over 3 months :S
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WOO! Lizzie stood up to Eli!
OH Sugar-Honey-Ice-Tea! SCARLETT! JUST LET ROSE AND SCORPIUS LOVE EACH OTHER! IT WAS MEANT TO BE!
Murrph. Why is it when I want to hate Scarlett, she has such a sweety attitude? But then she can be such a donkey's behind! Then I feel like she's an evil malevolence person. I want to feel like she's trying to steal Scorp from Rose so I can hate her til the end of eternity! >:D
ROSE, I'LL LOVE YOU!
Again, another beautiful chapter! Can't wait untill chapter 20!
Oh jeez, this story's almost over... Their last year is coming to a close. It's just- *sobs forever*Author's Response: Give me an L! Give me an I! Give me a - oh, you get the idea. GO LIZZIE!
Ooh. I SHIP JustMe AND ROSE! Just kidding. Scorose ftw. *cough* awkward.
Aaah. The end approaches :-( I can't believe I was stupid enough to start the story a few months before they graduate from Hogwarts. lolol who does that? I made it hard for myself, having to squish everything in to 2/3 months. *sigh*
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I'm not so sure I approve of jealous rose tbh. It's not fair on scorpius. But great chapter :) can't wait for the next bit!Author's Response: Aw don't be too harsh on her- she's under a lot of, ahem, pressure with exams and such ;)
But yay! Finally, a reviewer who sympathizes with Scorp! :P
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Okay, Scorpius is an idiot and after this whole thing he better finally see that Scarlett is manipulative and trying to get him back and doesn't care about hurting Rose. And I think Rose should have waited one more second to see if Scorpius was actually going to kiss her back as then she would have known more about what was happening. He will have a lot of explaining to do, though why he and Rose aren't yet together doesn't really make sense to me anyway. Eager for moreAuthor's Response: Rose should definitely have waited a bit longer to see if he kissed back, but I think she just didn't want to know the answer, just in case he did.
Yesss. He has a LOT of explaining to do, which is hopefully covered in the next chapter. I'm kinda scared to post it in case I mess it up/miss something haha.
They aren't together yet because I think it would be too soon after the whole Scarlett and Fabian palava. It takes a bit of time to build that trust back. :)
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