Hello there! :)
You seem to have an interesting story on your hands. I've read stories where Harry is assigned to protect people, but never really the other way around.
So this will be a different take on things to read!
Harley seems like a good girl. An original character with a great personality. This was a fairly short first chapter, but I'm sure it will pick up. And even though it was short, you still managed to intrigue the reader. You kept me curious and wanting to learn more about Harley and her life.
Well done! :)
Forum Name: Phoenix_Flames
House: HufflepuffAuthor's Response: Thank you very much :) I am sorry for the late response.
This is my first published effort I suppose and I was a bit nervous on how it would be received. There will be more to come soon, so keep looking out :)
I am very glad you liked it and can't wait to hear what else you have to say. Report Review
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