this is pretty good.i have written a story, and not a lot of ppl reviewed it, so im just hoping tat someone would realize wat it means to authors to just spend their time and review. keep going! ur doing gr8! :)

Author's Response: Lol I know what you mean, reviews are really helpful for authors. :) and aww thanks :)

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so sad yet incredibly written! u portrayed all the characters exactly right, i loved it, write more plz! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I am in the process of writing something else. :3

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What a wonderful story! You should write more chapters to it. It was incredibly sweet :)
I'll give you a ten when you add the next chapter! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks!
Well, I suppose I could try to write another chapter, but no promises. ;)
(I most likely will) :)


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Definitely came close to tears near the end there, that was so amazing

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Oh my gosh this is incredible. You had me tearing up a bit hehe

This really was great, wonderful job!

Author's Response: Hehe, sorry 'bout that. :)
Thank you for the review.

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This was not only amazing,but terrible. Terrible because it's terribly sad. Haha no worries,this was really,really excellent. Good work(:

Author's Response: Thank you! I just wrote it on a whim. (Did I spell that right?) Glad you enjoyed it, and didn't, it is what I aimed for. :)

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Oh. My. Gosh. That was so good! I could feel the pain and sadness through your impeccable description! Love it!

Author's Response: That is the nicest review I have ever gotten. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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